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Topic: He noticed me...
MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Thu 06/12/08 02:25 PM
He noticed me... ****************** Sitting here waitng- yet I'm not. On a dating site. Hmmmm why not. After a year, I said what the heck. No longer waiting, Sort of gave up. Here for freinds. No longer exspecting, Anything more. Then what the heck. To my galore. He noticed me. Wow I can't believe. Took a peek, Wrote me. I wrote back. Looks like a nice guy. Imagine that. Now I wait to see, What will happen next. Hes got a nice smile, Though he lives away miles. I'll give it another try. Never know, He might just be that guy. Why he choose me, I'll never know. Glad he's giving me a try. Now I wait again for his reply. Looking forward to giving this a try. By: Teddy 06-12-08

I_am_Tater Joined Wed 03/26/08 Posts: 283	Thu 06/12/08 02:27 PM
awww teddy that was awesome

boneyjoe Joined Sun 12/09/07 Posts: 6196	Thu 06/12/08 02:28 PM
ok now what you gonna do

SassyDenae Joined Mon 03/31/08 Posts: 62	Thu 06/12/08 02:29 PM
Yay teddy! That is great, great poem.

robert1652 Joined Wed 11/14/07 Posts: 8447	Thu 06/12/08 02:30 PM
Tell us come on we wanna know

I_am_Tater Joined Wed 03/26/08 Posts: 283	Thu 06/12/08 02:31 PM
yea c'mon girl give it up

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Thu 06/12/08 02:32 PM
Naw- Don't want to scare the poor guy off now!

CATBW56 Joined Tue 02/20/07 Posts: 7224	Thu 06/12/08 02:32 PM
that's great Teddy...that is so awesome........YAY!!!!!! In time I will be able to write something very similar

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Thu 06/12/08 02:34 PM
That is some great news Teddy

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76432	Thu 06/12/08 02:37 PM
Awww MsTeddy I wish you the best

jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 2365	Thu 06/12/08 03:31 PM
nice

feistybaby Joined Fri 04/25/08 Posts: 2422	Thu 06/12/08 04:05 PM
good going sweety...congrats

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Thu 06/12/08 07:09 PM Edited by AngelLight on Thu 06/12/08 07:10 PM
Good for you darlin' Fantastic..

CyPoet Joined Fri 01/11/08 Posts: 12494	Thu 06/12/08 09:11 PM


kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Thu 06/12/08 09:38 PM
sweet good for you

ArtGurl Joined Sun 04/08/07 Posts: 17722	Thu 06/12/08 10:41 PM
how could he not see you ...

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Thu 06/12/08 10:49 PM
He noticed me... ****************** Sitting here waitng- yet I'm not. On a dating site. Hmmmm why not. After a year, I said what the heck. No longer waiting, Sort of gave up. Here for freinds. No longer exspecting, Anything more. Then what the heck. To my galore. He noticed me. Wow I can't believe. Took a peek, Wrote me. I wrote back. Looks like a nice guy. Imagine that. Now I wait to see, What will happen next. Hes got a nice smile, Though he lives away miles. I'll give it another try. Never know, He might just be that guy. Why he choose me, I'll never know. Glad he's giving me a try. Now I wait again for his reply. Looking forward to giving this a try. By: Teddy 06-12-08 And what's not to notice??????? You are glorious! He would be lucky to snare you up!

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Fri 06/13/08 06:30 PM
He saw everything I see in a beautiful lady...her heart, her sweetness and everything about her. Go for it sweetie. Good luck with him.

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Sat 06/14/08 08:30 AM
Yeah for Teddy, best of luck!!

Puffins1958 Joined Tue 02/27/07 Posts: 13637	Sat 06/14/08 08:42 AM
Susan.... I wish you the BEST honey