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Edited by
feistybaby
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Mon 06/09/08 07:16 AM
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Like the knights of long ago
I am on a quest And until I find life's answers My soul will know no rest I seek a place of safety shelter where I may hide and in this sacred place when found forever more I'll bide A place of welcome, warmth, and joy held in arms so tight a racing heartbeat echoes mine through the long dark night the gentle kiss of morning as sunlight spreads across the sky a love amazing in it's grace to cherish as day's go by~ |
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Very nice
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WOW...very nice feisty..good write.
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very nice
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You all are too kind
TY~
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Very nice write!
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good one
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My favorite critics~
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Very lovely, I have a poem I have been working on called The Quest, so far I have 7 parts to it, 4 of them I believe I posted already, but they are somewhere lost in the pages of the poetry threads... will post more of them when I get the rest of them finished..
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TY~