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naturalstyle Joined Sat 04/26/08 Posts: 405	Sun 06/08/08 05:45 PM
Beautiful faces, trapped in space. Beautiful hearts, in need of warm place. Beautiful minds, so wrapped in thought. Beautiful souls, Which God did wrought. There's so much beauty, It's plain to see. Yet they're are many. like me...lonely. Beauty's the flower, not the vase. Beauty's seen shapeless, it has no face. To all the beauty, I've met out here. You're time is coming, be of good cheer.

koala0521 Joined Thu 02/07/08 Posts: 62	Sun 06/08/08 07:07 PM
Hey I thought that was really good Keep up the good work

Sharris Joined Sun 12/10/06 Posts: 7300	Sun 06/08/08 07:17 PM
Your soul expresses with exquisite simplicity.

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Mon 06/09/08 12:11 AM
"Beauty's the flower, not the vase." Well Said.

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Mon 06/09/08 06:26 AM
good write

naturalstyle Joined Sat 04/26/08 Posts: 405	Mon 06/09/08 07:59 AM
Thanks to all for the kind words.

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Mon 06/09/08 08:01 AM
Theres beauty in that poem!

feistybaby Joined Fri 04/25/08 Posts: 2422	Mon 06/09/08 08:06 AM
Very nice job and a great well wish for all us daydream believers ty~

JaymeStephens84a0lc Joined Mon 04/23/07 Posts: 2704	Thu 06/12/08 03:49 PM
I love it

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