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Edited by
Wolfeyes58
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Fri 06/06/08 09:56 AM
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Teardrops Of A Waterfall
As the water cascades over the rocks And gravity pulls it, to the stream below, When the sun shines just right Amongst the spray of the falls Is a beautiful rainbow. But, when I look to the top Of that cascading water come to call, It reminds me of the love lost Crying the teardrops of a waterfall. Peace and serenity guide me They surround me with a gentle calm, As I sit on the porch of my cabin Watching the breeze blow the palm. Tenderly I sit there as I rock Looking to see the height so tall, Thinking of what we could have gained Feeling the teardrops of a waterfall. There were promises made and broken Dreams that were meant to be, As the water crashes the rocks below It reminds me of a turbulent sea. I sit in the rocking chairs of ours And knew we could of had it all, But thinking back it was a dream Those tears from a waterfall. |
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you have an incredible way w/words, robert
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That rocking chair might aswell be a boat cause i'm right along with you in the turbulance of this ocean we call life. Great write, Robert.
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That rocking chair might aswell be a boat cause i'm right along with you in the turbulance of this ocean we call life. Great write, Robert. Thank you bigblue...just dwelling I guess. Just got inspired to write that no more than ten minutes ago. Thanks Brenda...glad you liked it. Thanks for the comment too sweetie. |
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Aww life and all its turbulence in the end we will see no matter how rocky things get it will be worth it all when the sea calms.
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Aww life and all its turbulence in the end we will see no matter how rocky things get it will be worth it all when the sea calms. ![]() The feelings of emotion may calm, but that waterfall will still flow..thanks Kristi... ![]() ![]() |
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Awww true but then we will see the beauty of that waterfall not the turbulence it leaves against the rocks. Instead we will see how it caresses them, more of a embrace.
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We might remember what might have been but look forward to what will be. Beautiful write Robert.
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We might remember what might have been but look forward to what will be. Beautiful write Robert. ![]() ![]() Thank you Pam, that's what I try to do. |
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Nicely done
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We might remember what might have been but look forward to what will be. Beautiful write Robert. ![]() ![]() |
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Awww true but then we will see the beauty of that waterfall not the turbulence it leaves against the rocks. Instead we will see how it caresses them, more of a embrace. ![]() I like that. Very nice contribution Kristi.... "Those tears from a waterfall"....this imagery touches the depth of the Soul...very moving. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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Awww true but then we will see the beauty of that waterfall not the turbulence it leaves against the rocks. Instead we will see how it caresses them, more of a embrace. ![]() I like that. Very nice contribution Kristi.... "Those tears from a waterfall"....this imagery touches the depth of the Soul...very moving. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Glad you liked it my dear...I try as you know. Thanks Pammie, I knew you would like it sweetie.. And Calm..appreciate your comment as well. |
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This was just wonderful. I love waterfalls, but I never thought of them that way. Will have to look again.
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Wonderful write, (((Robert)))!!
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This was just wonderful. I love waterfalls, but I never thought of them that way. Will have to look again. They are beautiful sweetie, and that is the place where I will be one day. Only I won't be thinking of the bad, but the future of what may come over them falls. Thanks Erica, I knew you would like it. |
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I can see the tear drops...
Lovely write (((Robert))) ![]() ![]() |
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Beautiful write Robert but remember after the water falls and hits the rock it then smooths out for the new adventure farther down the river
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Beautiful write Robert but remember after the water falls and hits the rock it then smooths out for the new adventure farther down the river ![]() Yes, after all the crashing of the water, it does get calm into a pool of sereness. Thank you Cat. ![]() Thanks Susan...it is so good to see you back. Hope you're doing better sweetie. |
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