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Topic: A hard days work
pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Wed 06/04/08 11:12 AM
As you walk through the door From a hard days work I give you a wink and a little smirk You see the rose pedals all over the floor Leading you straight to the bedroom door The room is dim the candles are lit It's time for us to play a bit The radio is playing our favorite song And here together we know we belong When I lay you down to relax your mind And start to kiss you to help you unwind I look in your eyes, and love what I see Knowing together it's pure ecstasy I love to take you to our special place Nothing means more then the smile on your face To look at you and hear you my heart skips a beat Holding you, loving you I now feel complete

bigblue29 Joined Fri 03/07/08 Posts: 709	Wed 06/04/08 11:18 AM
Now that's what i want when i get off work! Ty for the thought.

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Wed 06/04/08 11:20 AM
Now that's what i want when i get off work! Ty for the thought. thank you for responding. I think that's the way it should be always a new adventure and surprises

1956deluxe Joined Thu 12/06/07 Posts: 8559	Wed 06/04/08 11:24 AM
DANG!

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Wed 06/04/08 11:26 AM
Nicely Written.

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Wed 06/04/08 11:57 AM
WOW Pam...you know how to make someone feel at home.

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Wed 06/04/08 01:37 PM
thanks everyone, now wouldn't we all look forward to going to work knowing we had something special to come home to every night

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Wed 06/04/08 01:50 PM
Great writing Pam. Who wouldn't want to come home to that?

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Wed 06/04/08 03:09 PM
Great writing Pam. Who wouldn't want to come home to that? thank you Pam

jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 2365	Wed 06/04/08 05:44 PM
pam, you're the cutest

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Fri 06/06/08 06:16 AM
pam, you're the cutest thank you Jimmy, your a sweetie too

frankfk Joined Sun 09/24/06 Posts: 5684	Fri 06/06/08 02:53 PM
everyman's desire, nice subject pam As you walk through the door From a hard days work I give you a wink and a little smirk You see the rose pedals all over the floor Leading you straight to the bedroom door The room is dim the candles are lit It's time for us to play a bit The radio is playing our favorite song And here together we know we belong When I lay you down to relax your mind And start to kiss you to help you unwind I look in your eyes, and love what I see Knowing together it's pure ecstasy I love to take you to our special place Nothing means more then the smile on your face To look at you and hear you my heart skips a beat Holding you, loving you I now feel complete

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Fri 06/06/08 02:58 PM
Great write Pam Rose pedals, candles, plus you....one lucky guy

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Fri 06/06/08 07:16 PM
Great write Pam Rose pedals, candles, plus you....one lucky guy Your to sweet, thank you And thank you Frank also

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