Topic: In Your Arms
sweetcountrygirl's photo
Sat 02/17/07 11:37 AM
In your arms I repent
In your arms I am spent
In your arms I smile and grin
In your arms I resent
In your arms this lust is sent
In your arms my heart chants
In your arms I do bend
In your arms I'm lost in your charms
In your arms your kisses send
waves of passion, long ago scant
In your arms tears fall
In your arms your words break all
In your arms broken and bent
In your arms once again
I walk away trust trashed; alone

Words spoken you can't take back
Love freely given, taken back
passion turns to hurt,
then to anger
Oh, how my heart hungers
for something once true
and never forgotten
pain weighs emotionally
and love turned rotten
makes my heart harden

Walls of granite up in an instant
You knocked them down
to build them again
These stones so cold
so hard and bold
My heart wants to really let go...





lionsbrew's photo
Sat 02/17/07 11:49 AM
wow scg youve got another goodonr here:smile:

TxsGal3333's photo
Sat 02/17/07 11:52 AM
Very good girl and I can very well relate to this to well flowerforyou

michael1313's photo
Sat 02/17/07 12:11 PM
tears on my heart,by your handflowerforyou

well written SCG(W)flowerforyou :heart:

karmafury's photo
Sat 02/17/07 12:13 PM
WoW! Fantastic read. Thank you SCG.

Cybear's photo
Sat 02/17/07 12:40 PM
Oh!My!Gawd!Where's this coming from?Wow!It's just flowing from a
diff.parallel line.Very Powerful & Riveting.This is totally rawkin out
from every angle.This is superior work SCG.I am enthralled and captured
within this poem's content.Unbelievable;and knocking at surrealism's
door.I love your Poetry gurl.You Rawk!Godspeed!Cybear
:smile: flowerforyou :heart: blushing embarassed

no photo
Sat 02/17/07 12:44 PM
:heart: And when your walls, come tumbling down, and when the walls,
come tumbling down, He will come around.......
You will once again give Love its try
And only 'GOD Knows Why', wink,wink,,,Yes those were kid rocks
words, but thought they fit here...Great 'love' with very bad
HURT, SORRY!!!!:heart: ((((HUGS))))):heart: flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Sat 02/17/07 12:45 PM
(((SCG)))
Powerful Words spoken
so Beautifully !
:heart:

Morena350's photo
Sat 02/17/07 12:48 PM
waooo!!SCG, you take your time, but when you write is worth the time
girl!!! wonderful

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Sat 02/17/07 12:51 PM
Tears of pain
Tears of hunger
Tears of strain
Tears of Younger days
Tears of joy
Tears of love
Tears afraid
Afraid to let go of
this pain
so familiar, yet nothing to gain

This heart is tortured
This heart had mourned
This heart has rejoiced
This heart had matured
this heart is young
This heart is old
This heart is broken
This heart is gone

If you find it please return it
To it's rightful place within my chest
Handle with care for it's been burned
scorned and torched by hands of ill reproach
Be gentle, Be Kind
and rewards here, You will surely find...

( and such is life...)
:cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:

michael1313's photo
Sat 02/17/07 01:05 PM
another tear on my heart,from your handsmokin

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Sat 02/17/07 01:30 PM
Thanks all of you for you support here...
really appreciate your words of encouragement,
and comments...:cry: :heart: :smile: