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Topic: A beautiful bird
pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Fri 05/30/08 11:05 AM
The sun was shinning brightly And I could hardly wait To gaze outside my window And look at my estate The breeze was blowing briskly And it made the flowers sway My garden was enchanted On this inspiring day My eyes fell upon a little bird I beckoned him to come And sit upon my sill I smiled at him so gently And gave him a crust of bread And quickly closed the window And smashed his freakin head....

Unknow Joined Thu 06/14/07 Posts: 2155	Fri 05/30/08 11:09 AM
OMG!!!!!!

CyPoet Joined Fri 01/11/08 Posts: 12494	Fri 05/30/08 11:10 AM


bigblue29 Joined Fri 03/07/08 Posts: 709	Fri 05/30/08 11:24 AM
That was not what i was expecting at all! Lol!

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Fri 05/30/08 12:15 PM
Whoa! Little irked there pk? Got a tad rough with this one---love the shock!

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Fri 05/30/08 12:27 PM
The sun was shinning brightly And I could hardly wait To gaze outside my window And look at my estate The breeze was blowing briskly And it made the flowers sway My garden was enchanted On this inspiring day My eyes fell upon a little bird I beckoned him to come And sit upon my sill I smiled at him so gently And gave him a crust of bread And quickly closed the window And smashed his freakin head.... OMG is right!! I don't know what to do.....

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Fri 05/30/08 12:36 PM
That was GREAT!

Gaia_Moonchilde Joined Thu 05/01/08 Posts: 307	Fri 05/30/08 12:37 PM
Dayum Pam!! That was freakin awesome!!

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Fri 05/30/08 12:44 PM
have to be sassy some days.Don't know who wrote it my sister told me this.but thanks for reading all

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Fri 05/30/08 07:18 PM
have to be sassy some days.Don't know who wrote it my sister told me this.but thanks for reading all OMG...I was enthralled by it all and how sweet it was, because I knew that you were back in your flow again, until the poor bird met his demise...geesh. lolol.

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Sat 05/31/08 07:11 AM
have to be sassy some days.Don't know who wrote it my sister told me this.but thanks for reading all OMG...I was enthralled by it all and how sweet it was, because I knew that you were back in your flow again, until the poor bird met his demise...geesh. lolol.

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