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Topic: Awkward Pause
kc0003's photo
Tue 05/27/08 09:42 PM
Oh, god
Why did I say that
Why
When will I ever learn
to just
keep my mouth
shut

This awkward feeling between
hush and possible rejection
Between breathing and
suffocation
Anticipation
Desperation
Expectation
Hopefulness
It all comes to a head...
Here and now
in the shadow of my exposure

In the midst of this
stifling quiet
The little specs of
yellow
in your eyes are
burning me
Like the magnified sun
of a seemingly innocent childhood
experiment with an ant hill and a piece of glass
but, the though was launched
its sink or swim
do or die
somebody please kill me...
Before these knots in my stomach turn me inside out

This, this,
This, transference of power...
This, leap from the safety of
my self contained
hid-a-way
whose walls
only yesterday
were thought to be
impenetrable
Now to be standing here engulfed by
this uncomfortable
loss of poise
At the mercy of
another soul
searching for the end of loneliness
Is it my sanctuary
you seek
my heart where you will find
comfort
or does it cease today
because i spoke out of turn
Put my body naked
in the middle of a
most desolate tract
Stand unprotected in
the sandstorm of your
silence

Say something,
anything...


kc08


STEELERSLUV's photo
Tue 05/27/08 09:44 PM
OMG that was beautiful! That's exactly how i feel at this very moment. Thank you.

kc0003's photo
Tue 05/27/08 09:46 PM

OMG that was beautiful! That's exactly how i feel at this very moment. Thank you.


thank you
though i am sorry you have to feel this way

flowerforyou flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Tue 05/27/08 09:47 PM

Oh, god
Why did I say that
Why
When will I ever learn
to just
keep my mouth
shut

This awkward feeling between
hush and possible rejection
Between breathing and
suffocation
Anticipation
Desperation
Expectation
Hopefulness
It all comes to a head...
Here and now
in the shadow of my exposure

In the midst of this
stifling quiet
The little specs of
yellow
in your eyes are
burning me
Like the magnified sun
of a seemingly innocent childhood
experiment with an ant hill and a piece of glass
but, the though was launched
its sink or swim
do or die
somebody please kill me...
Before these knots in my stomach turn me inside out

This, this,
This, transference of power...
This, leap from the safety of
my self contained
hid-a-way
whose walls
only yesterday
were thought to be
impenetrable
Now to be standing here engulfed by
this uncomfortable
loss of poise
At the mercy of
another soul
searching for the end of loneliness
Is it my sanctuary
you seek
my heart where you will find
comfort
or does it cease today
because i spoke out of turn
Put my body naked
in the middle of a
most desolate tract
Stand unprotected in
the sandstorm of your
silence

Say something,
anything...


kc08




You just amaze me,,, So Pure,, Ohhhhhhhhhhhh This is simply ...
<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< Left speechless as I wonder off into the beauty of your Soul..... flowerforyou

ArtGurl's photo
Tue 05/27/08 09:48 PM
Brilliant! I felt that...

Your expression is getting stronger and stronger ... a joy to read...and to feel ... yummy!

:heart: flowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Tue 05/27/08 09:53 PM


Oh, god
Why did I say that
Why
When will I ever learn
to just
keep my mouth
shut

This awkward feeling between
hush and possible rejection
Between breathing and
suffocation
Anticipation
Desperation
Expectation
Hopefulness
It all comes to a head...
Here and now
in the shadow of my exposure

In the midst of this
stifling quiet
The little specs of
yellow
in your eyes are
burning me
Like the magnified sun
of a seemingly innocent childhood
experiment with an ant hill and a piece of glass
but, the though was launched
its sink or swim
do or die
somebody please kill me...
Before these knots in my stomach turn me inside out

This, this,
This, transference of power...
This, leap from the safety of
my self contained
hid-a-way
whose walls
only yesterday
were thought to be
impenetrable
Now to be standing here engulfed by
this uncomfortable
loss of poise
At the mercy of
another soul
searching for the end of loneliness
Is it my sanctuary
you seek
my heart where you will find
comfort
or does it cease today
because i spoke out of turn
Put my body naked
in the middle of a
most desolate tract
Stand unprotected in
the sandstorm of your
silence

Say something,
anything...


kc08




You just amaze me,,, So Pure,, Ohhhhhhhhhhhh This is simply ...
<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< Left speechless as I wonder off into the beauty of your Soul..... flowerforyou


thanks mom
as long as you are not speechless when we meet...ah hell i will talk enough for both of us...

:heart: you


kc0003's photo
Tue 05/27/08 09:59 PM

Brilliant! I felt that...

Your expression is getting stronger and stronger ... a joy to read...and to feel ... yummy!

:heart: flowerforyou


ah my lovely friend
you are always an inspiration to me

flowerforyou flowerforyou :heart:

no photo
Tue 05/27/08 10:32 PM
nice to see something new

S

Wolfeyes58's photo
Tue 05/27/08 11:46 PM
Kevin, that was amazing. Simply put. Awe inspiring. Great write my friend.

kc0003's photo
Wed 05/28/08 01:48 AM

nice to see something new

S



i know stef i have been busy lately
nice to hear from you


flowerforyou flowerforyou

AngelLight's photo
Wed 05/28/08 07:41 AM
flowerforyou :heart:

funny thing is, often, we are actually the strongest when we let go of power, the need to be in control.

really good job kevin :heart:

kc0003's photo
Wed 05/28/08 09:32 AM

Kevin, that was amazing. Simply put. Awe inspiring. Great write my friend.


robert i appreciate that very much
thank you

pkh's photo
Wed 05/28/08 10:04 AM
flowerforyou amazing as always Kevin

kc0003's photo
Wed 05/28/08 10:05 AM

flowerforyou :heart:

funny thing is, often, we are actually the strongest when we let go of power, the need to be in control.

really good job kevin :heart:


in some ways you are right
thank you for the comment

flowerforyou :heart:

LAMom's photo
Wed 05/28/08 11:00 AM



Oh, god
Why did I say that
Why
When will I ever learn
to just
keep my mouth
shut

This awkward feeling between
hush and possible rejection
Between breathing and
suffocation
Anticipation
Desperation
Expectation
Hopefulness
It all comes to a head...
Here and now
in the shadow of my exposure

In the midst of this
stifling quiet
The little specs of
yellow
in your eyes are
burning me
Like the magnified sun
of a seemingly innocent childhood
experiment with an ant hill and a piece of glass
but, the though was launched
its sink or swim
do or die
somebody please kill me...
Before these knots in my stomach turn me inside out

This, this,
This, transference of power...
This, leap from the safety of
my self contained
hid-a-way
whose walls
only yesterday
were thought to be
impenetrable
Now to be standing here engulfed by
this uncomfortable
loss of poise
At the mercy of
another soul
searching for the end of loneliness
Is it my sanctuary
you seek
my heart where you will find
comfort
or does it cease today
because i spoke out of turn
Put my body naked
in the middle of a
most desolate tract
Stand unprotected in
the sandstorm of your
silence

Say something,
anything...


kc08




You just amaze me,,, So Pure,, Ohhhhhhhhhhhh This is simply ...
<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< Left speechless as I wonder off into the beauty of your Soul..... flowerforyou


thanks mom
as long as you are not speechless when we meet...ah hell i will talk enough for both of us...

:heart: you




Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh We shall have so much to talk about,,, Hell sometimes I'ts hard to shut me off,,,lol,,,

Hugs to you flowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Wed 05/28/08 11:16 AM




Oh, god
Why did I say that
Why
When will I ever learn
to just
keep my mouth
shut

This awkward feeling between
hush and possible rejection
Between breathing and
suffocation
Anticipation
Desperation
Expectation
Hopefulness
It all comes to a head...
Here and now
in the shadow of my exposure

In the midst of this
stifling quiet
The little specs of
yellow
in your eyes are
burning me
Like the magnified sun
of a seemingly innocent childhood
experiment with an ant hill and a piece of glass
but, the though was launched
its sink or swim
do or die
somebody please kill me...
Before these knots in my stomach turn me inside out

This, this,
This, transference of power...
This, leap from the safety of
my self contained
hid-a-way
whose walls
only yesterday
were thought to be
impenetrable
Now to be standing here engulfed by
this uncomfortable
loss of poise
At the mercy of
another soul
searching for the end of loneliness
Is it my sanctuary
you seek
my heart where you will find
comfort
or does it cease today
because i spoke out of turn
Put my body naked
in the middle of a
most desolate tract
Stand unprotected in
the sandstorm of your
silence

Say something,
anything...


kc08




You just amaze me,,, So Pure,, Ohhhhhhhhhhhh This is simply ...
<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< Left speechless as I wonder off into the beauty of your Soul..... flowerforyou


thanks mom
as long as you are not speechless when we meet...ah hell i will talk enough for both of us...

:heart: you




Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh We shall have so much to talk about,,, Hell sometimes I'ts hard to shut me off,,,lol,,,

Hugs to you flowerforyou


lol...we may be in trouble then... laugh

flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou


LAMom's photo
Wed 05/28/08 11:17 AM





Oh, god
Why did I say that
Why
When will I ever learn
to just
keep my mouth
shut

This awkward feeling between
hush and possible rejection
Between breathing and
suffocation
Anticipation
Desperation
Expectation
Hopefulness
It all comes to a head...
Here and now
in the shadow of my exposure

In the midst of this
stifling quiet
The little specs of
yellow
in your eyes are
burning me
Like the magnified sun
of a seemingly innocent childhood
experiment with an ant hill and a piece of glass
but, the though was launched
its sink or swim
do or die
somebody please kill me...
Before these knots in my stomach turn me inside out

This, this,
This, transference of power...
This, leap from the safety of
my self contained
hid-a-way
whose walls
only yesterday
were thought to be
impenetrable
Now to be standing here engulfed by
this uncomfortable
loss of poise
At the mercy of
another soul
searching for the end of loneliness
Is it my sanctuary
you seek
my heart where you will find
comfort
or does it cease today
because i spoke out of turn
Put my body naked
in the middle of a
most desolate tract
Stand unprotected in
the sandstorm of your
silence

Say something,
anything...


kc08




You just amaze me,,, So Pure,, Ohhhhhhhhhhhh This is simply ...
<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< Left speechless as I wonder off into the beauty of your Soul..... flowerforyou


thanks mom
as long as you are not speechless when we meet...ah hell i will talk enough for both of us...

:heart: you




Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh We shall have so much to talk about,,, Hell sometimes I'ts hard to shut me off,,,lol,,,

Hugs to you flowerforyou


lol...we may be in trouble then... laugh

flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou




Possibly,,, laugh

no photo
Wed 05/28/08 11:26 AM

Oh, god
Why did I say that
Why
When will I ever learn
to just
keep my mouth
shut

This awkward feeling between
hush and possible rejection
Between breathing and
suffocation
Anticipation
Desperation
Expectation
Hopefulness
It all comes to a head...
Here and now
in the shadow of my exposure

In the midst of this
stifling quiet
The little specs of
yellow
in your eyes are
burning me
Like the magnified sun
of a seemingly innocent childhood
experiment with an ant hill and a piece of glass
but, the though was launched
its sink or swim
do or die
somebody please kill me...
Before these knots in my stomach turn me inside out

This, this,
This, transference of power...
This, leap from the safety of
my self contained
hid-a-way
whose walls
only yesterday
were thought to be
impenetrable
Now to be standing here engulfed by
this uncomfortable
loss of poise
At the mercy of
another soul
searching for the end of loneliness
Is it my sanctuary
you seek
my heart where you will find
comfort
or does it cease today
because i spoke out of turn
Put my body naked
in the middle of a
most desolate tract
Stand unprotected in
the sandstorm of your
silence

Say something,
anything...


kc08




OH kc this was flawless. My alltime favorite piece by you so far. I cannot tell you how many times I've felt exactly the way you're just described....really...this was just damn good!:heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:

kc0003's photo
Wed 05/28/08 11:34 AM


Oh, god
Why did I say that
Why
When will I ever learn
to just
keep my mouth
shut

This awkward feeling between
hush and possible rejection
Between breathing and
suffocation
Anticipation
Desperation
Expectation
Hopefulness
It all comes to a head...
Here and now
in the shadow of my exposure

In the midst of this
stifling quiet
The little specs of
yellow
in your eyes are
burning me
Like the magnified sun
of a seemingly innocent childhood
experiment with an ant hill and a piece of glass
but, the though was launched
its sink or swim
do or die
somebody please kill me...
Before these knots in my stomach turn me inside out

This, this,
This, transference of power...
This, leap from the safety of
my self contained
hid-a-way
whose walls
only yesterday
were thought to be
impenetrable
Now to be standing here engulfed by
this uncomfortable
loss of poise
At the mercy of
another soul
searching for the end of loneliness
Is it my sanctuary
you seek
my heart where you will find
comfort
or does it cease today
because i spoke out of turn
Put my body naked
in the middle of a
most desolate tract
Stand unprotected in
the sandstorm of your
silence

Say something,
anything...


kc08




OH kc this was flawless. My alltime favorite piece by you so far. I cannot tell you how many times I've felt exactly the way you're just described....really...this was just damn good!:heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:



thank you very very much
to be perfectly honest i would have been disappointed had you not liked this one
as i have come to realize that you and i are not altogether that different

thank you for the kind words and the experience that is the great mswizard

flowerforyou :heart: :heart: flowerforyou

no photo
Wed 05/28/08 01:18 PM


nice to see something new

S



i know stef i have been busy lately
nice to hear from you


flowerforyou flowerforyou



i know you have

this is such a powerful piece
all i can say is wow!!!
love this one

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