Topic: A Child's end
calmguy3's photo
Tue 05/27/08 09:14 PM
frown :cry: brokenheart
A Child's end

On 2-12-08 11:23 pm at my kins

A call came in

I gladly made mine

The choice to answer the ring on the line

As i bring the phone near my ear

My friends voice i hear

Hello with a grin

I give to my long time friend

During my attempt to bring her cheer

A heaviness in her voice i clearly hear

As her voice flows into my ear

An unclear fear appears

My inner voice i hear

A whisper that's very clear

Telling me theirs something very wrong here

With this friend i hold dear

Her words stab my soul like a sharp spear

An electric shock of fear

Comes from the next words i hear

Their will be no child born this year

To heaven my child has gone from here



That is something i wrote for my friend

But couldn't bring myself to send

She lost her little one just 4 months in

Way before it's life could begin

How i hurt for my childless friend who stands near

Impossible to hold back tears

As the last word she hears

is the Reverends Amen

For a child's end

That didn't even begin

LAMom's photo
Tue 05/27/08 09:16 PM
brokenheart flowerforyou :cry:

Love & Light

calmguy3's photo
Wed 05/28/08 02:41 AM
Thank you LAMom

AngelLight's photo
Wed 05/28/08 07:51 AM
:cry: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:

calmguy3's photo
Wed 05/28/08 08:29 PM
Thanks AngelLight

For relating

LAMom's photo
Wed 05/28/08 08:31 PM

Thank you LAMom



Your Welcome,,,



calmguy3's photo
Wed 05/28/08 08:32 PM
My Female cousin says i should give our friend what i wrote, to show her that her friends felt her pain. I'm afraid it will refresh the trauma.
I'm torn between being supportive or getting in the way of recovery.
I'd appreciate anyones opinion

LAMom's photo
Wed 05/28/08 08:35 PM

My Female cousin says i should give our friend what i wrote, to show her that her friends felt her pain. I'm afraid it will refresh the trauma.
I'm torn between being supportive or getting in the way of recovery.
I'd appreciate anyones opinion


Follow your Heart,,, I would want to see this, mending ones heart takes time,,, the memories are always there yet the lose is so hard to bare,,,

I have not lost any of my children I have given birth too,, I did however lose a dear angel just days ago,,, My spirit is at a loss my soul aching,,, I would want to receive this lovely poetic soul touching kindness......flowerforyou

pkh's photo
Thu 05/29/08 07:22 AM
:heart: :cry: love and light

mteagle31's photo
Thu 05/29/08 07:48 AM
There is much to do today. An angel has gone to heaven you see.
How sad that is and Jesus cried, we all cried when we came and He told us about her.
There is a person down on earth that is grieving for this small child and Jesus has sent an angel to help them through this day.
Jesus is walking her to a special place for small children and the other small angels will help her adjust to heaven.
She will be happy there.
I hope everyone says a prayer for her, and all the other children that go to be with the Lord.
There will be a bright star in the sky tonight, as this little angel will light her star and take her place in heaven and all the other sweet angels that are there and have their stars in the skies.
So when you look in the sky and see all those bright stars, say a prayer for all the angels that are up there.


calmguy3's photo
Thu 05/29/08 01:39 PM
Thanks to you all.
My heart goes out to you LAMom. I know what it feels like to lose someone you hold dear. My Mom crossed over to the other side 4 yrs ago she Literally passed from this world to the other with a smile on her face even the nurses in the room looked at us in astonishment as my mom crossed her arms across her chest smiled and then released herself from her body. it was obvious she was happy with the life she lived and content to start her new one on the other side. Two thumbs up to my Mom. Now thats the way i'd like to go,willing, Satisfied, pleased or content and no worries.

d4tc's photo
Thu 05/29/08 01:51 PM
Sorry to hear that. :cry:


Very smooth story. :smile: Nicely written. drinker

calmguy3's photo
Thu 05/29/08 02:31 PM
Much obliged.

My Mom kicked A#% in a good way bigsmile while she was here.
I can just see her now sitting around with her old and new friends drinking spiritual coffee :wink: laugh while the echos of her laughter linger in the air like the scent of fresh baked cookies.