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Topic: th Wolf and the Rose
michael1313's photo
Fri 02/09/07 11:37 PM
As I hunt in the dark of the night,
alone on my trail,in the clear moonlight,
feeding on rabbits,who died in the fight,
feeding to habbits of lonelyness plight,
putting my two bitts,when I just might,
along my path on th darkest of night,
I come upon a moonlit lake,
your beauty once more,
did my lonely eyes partake,
like a cool drink of water,
to moisten my lips,
the softest carress,
from your fingertips,
my eyes did carress,
your sweet red lips,
my eyes did carress,
the curve of your hips,
How I hungered for your sweet kiss,
now I linger for your tenderness,
how I'm longing for your soft carress,
now my hunger is for your true bliss,
across the waters of this small lake,
the scent of your passion,
the heat of your aggression,
the love in your emotion,
across these waters,my soul you take,
within your power of GhostShip's wake,
the waters ripple for your beauties sake,
heartbeat triple,for the passion we'd make,
the scent of your passion,
the heat of your aggression,
the love in your emotion,
and the inviting beauty,
of your everlasting desire,
within your bounty,
and love out lasting the fire,
within our passions,
everlasting and higher,

then I awoke,alone in the night,
in a cold sweat,and passions delite,
I'll just bet,the love in my sight,
took her lone ride on my GhostShip tonight,
how long did she glide,to find this Knight,
alone in the dark,under a moonlit night,
to give me sweet love in her kisses delite,
to show me her heart,in our loving made right,
then I awoke,alone in the night,
alone in my thoughts,being held tight,
dreaming again,another sleepless night...
Lonely Soulsmokin

LAMom's photo
Fri 02/09/07 11:45 PM
OMG !! WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!
Incredible Passion,, Incredible
Just WOWWWWWWWWWWWWW !!!!

Morena350's photo
Fri 02/09/07 11:51 PM
Im telling you michael, your on a roll hon!!!
your getting better each day man!!!

michael1313's photo
Fri 02/09/07 11:55 PM
it was this pic. that gave me the idea for this poem...

Thanx for reading y'allsmokin

ToyotaGirl's photo
Sat 02/10/07 05:34 AM
Beautiful Michael, a well written peice of work. Love the pix as
well.flowerforyou

michael1313's photo
Sat 02/10/07 08:25 AM
Thank You T.G.
the pic is a .GIF image...
the water is suposed to ripple the reflections...

but .GIF images are not supported in here...ohwell

Thanx for reading my workssmokin

creationsfire's photo
Sat 02/10/07 09:41 AM
You write with beauty of heart and soul. This is a work from the heart
and is hauntingly upbeat. Dreaming of love is how I take this work and I
think it is wonderful!

Thank you for sharing so much of your heart and soul.

Smiles,

Karen

michael1313's photo
Sat 02/10/07 09:51 AM
Karen...
You read much into my dreams of love,
my heart tells my fingers,what I'm dreaming of,
longing for life,looking for love,
looking for th One,the Lady I'm dreaming of...flowerforyou

terisa's photo
Sat 02/10/07 04:08 PM
michael..i am speechless..that one was so over the top...wow

michael1313's photo
Sat 02/10/07 05:13 PM
Thank You Terisa...flowerforyou
keeping my editors busysmokin

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Sat 02/10/07 07:49 PM
Beautiful M...
and the picture is great! Love it!flowerforyou happy

TxsGal3333's photo
Sun 02/11/07 02:25 AM
Very very good one Mflowerforyou

michael1313's photo
Sun 02/11/07 06:47 AM
Thanx SCG,found a great website for th pix...

http://www.sexiluv.com/

Thanx Ms.Txs.
thank You both for reading...flowerforyou

michael1313's photo
Sun 02/11/07 12:47 PM
some times a picture is worth a thousand wordssmokin

michael1313's photo
Sun 02/11/07 04:33 PM
and a dream,is just another poemsmokin

venusrose's photo
Sun 02/11/07 04:49 PM
Well, I would love to see you and Creationsfire(Karen) do another
duet...a very creative team I must say.

michael1313's photo
Sun 02/11/07 04:51 PM
THANX!!!blushing

I'll ask if she wants to...smokin

michael1313's photo
Mon 02/12/07 05:27 PM
she is shy,and we are talking it oversmokin

no photo
Mon 02/12/07 06:21 PM
:wink: Michael, good one!!! Was away for a spell. Did u miss me?
flowerforyou Anyways, i missed coming on, thus i am here again.
:heart:

michael1313's photo
Mon 02/12/07 11:38 PM
was wondering what happened to th peaches...

how you doing Peachimon?flowerforyou

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