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Topic: You Open Me
AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Mon 05/19/08 05:12 AM
you open me like the sunrise opening the day you open me like the ocean running to play you open me like clouds parting to light you open me like a heart finding insight you open me like a bird spreading its wings you open me like a hand offering something you open me like the night reaching to moon you open me like a butterfly leaving cocoon you open me like a Soul blooming to rejoice you open me like a decision needing a choice you open me, and like the river flows freely, so does my love for you JDS 05/19/08

frankfk Joined Sun 09/24/06 Posts: 5684	Mon 05/19/08 05:23 AM
good tribute with deep thoughts of realization, very nice you open me like the sunrise opening the day you open me like the ocean running to play you open me like clouds parting to light you open me like a heart finding insight you open me like a bird spreading its wings you open me like a hand offering something you open me like the night reaching to moon you open me like a butterfly leaving cocoon you open me like a Soul blooming to rejoice you open me like a decision needing a choice you open me, and like the river flows freely, so does my love for you JDS 05/19/08

Snoman1951 Joined Tue 04/01/08 Posts: 5731	Mon 05/19/08 05:26 AM


BluesPreacher Joined Mon 05/19/08 Posts: 77	Mon 05/19/08 05:42 AM
very beautifully written

2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Mon 05/19/08 05:45 AM
Absolutely lovely..

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Mon 05/19/08 06:32 AM
Ty gentle men

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Mon 05/19/08 08:07 AM
Wonderful Write Angel.

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Mon 05/19/08 09:21 AM
Wonderful Write Angel. Ty sweet J

bigblue29 Joined Fri 03/07/08 Posts: 709	Mon 05/19/08 09:29 AM
Goodmorning Angel Pretty write.

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Mon 05/19/08 10:37 AM
And you my dear have opened my world into your beautiful life and words...thanks so much for being who you are.

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Mon 05/19/08 11:24 AM
Goodmorning Angel Pretty write. GM bigblue. Ty for reading

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Mon 05/19/08 11:26 AM
And you my dear have opened my world into your beautiful life and words...thanks so much for being who you are. Likewise Robert, likewise

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Mon 05/19/08 11:58 AM
wonderful write

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Mon 05/19/08 03:45 PM
wonderful write Ty (((Pam)))

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