Topic: Every time I look at the stars | |
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I gazed in your eyes,
Such a beautiful blue; My heart whispered to me, And that’s right when I knew; The waves had ceased crashing, On the sand at our feet; Time had stopped passing, My search was complete; I finally discovered, What I'd known all along; A mystery uncovered, That just couldn't be wrong; It wasn't our first kiss, Nor' the day that we met; But I realized something, I will never forget; With the stars shining brightly, From high up above; I'd one word to describe it, That word, is love. I knew then these feelings, For my sweetheart were true; The man of my dreams, And my soulmate, is you. I think of it every time, That I look at the stars; This memory is mine, But that moment was OURS. |
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beautiful
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that made me tingle all over, that was beautiful
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"I think of it every time,
That I look at the stars; This memory is mine, But that moment was OURS." Love that phrase |
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"I think of it every time, That I look at the stars; This memory is mine, But that moment was OURS." Love that phrase I agree Karen, the whole poem was beautiful, but this phrase just captures it all. Very well written. |
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WELL WRITTEN
I gazed in your eyes, Such a beautiful blue; My heart whispered to me, And that’s right when I knew; The waves had ceased crashing, On the sand at our feet; Time had stopped passing, My search was complete; I finally discovered, What I'd known all along; A mystery uncovered, That just couldn't be wrong; It wasn't our first kiss, Nor' the day that we met; But I realized something, I will never forget; With the stars shining brightly, From high up above; I'd one word to describe it, That word, is love. I knew then these feelings, For my sweetheart were true; The man of my dreams, And my soulmate, is you. I think of it every time, That I look at the stars; This memory is mine, But that moment was OURS. |
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Awesome loved it sweet memories
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Very dear Sexy, like YOU are..... Nice work.
And did you know that everytime you gaze up at the stars. A little bit of heaven sprinkles into your soul??? |
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wow that was very romantic hun good job
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