Topic: Beautiful Fish
lurchs_sister's photo
Tue 05/13/08 11:36 AM
I go to the doctor
Then sit there and WIsh
That I could be
A beautiful fish

Then I could swim
There in the tank
And not worry bout money
That's not in the bank

They take me back
Not a look at my face
Then shut me in
A tiny space

I sit there and wait
For the doc to come in
He shakes my hand
And gives a cold grin

I sit there and think
Bout water and bubbles
Where I would have
Many less troubles

He looks and listens
Sticks and pokes
Then he makes
Some stupid jokes

He sends me home
With pills to take
And a few kind words
For posterity's sake

Water and food
And a little air
If I was a fish
For all I would care

But I am a woman
Stuck in this place
Dreaming of fish
What a disgrace

One of these days
My body will be whole
Then I won't dream
Of swimmin in a bowl

writer_gurl's photo
Tue 05/13/08 11:41 AM
That's awesome!!...and so true about Doctorsbigsmile

MirrorMirror's photo
Tue 05/13/08 11:45 AM
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lurchs_sister's photo
Tue 05/13/08 11:46 AM
Thanks Writer!!flowerforyou flowerforyou


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Wolfeyes58's photo
Tue 05/13/08 06:09 PM
I loved this when you read it to me...I could see the descriptions as you read. Hi Nemo and Dory.

LAMom's photo
Tue 05/13/08 10:15 PM
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zanne46's photo
Tue 05/13/08 11:02 PM
Hello my sweet friend...

did you get the text pick I sent u of the ocean???

not the greatest pic but...at least I sent u some sunshine and sand and blue waters..

better than a fish bowl...:wink:

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ArtGurl's photo
Tue 05/13/08 11:04 PM
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d4tc's photo
Tue 05/13/08 11:55 PM
LOL. laugh Very Nice Vicki! flowerforyou :wink:

lurchs_sister's photo
Wed 05/14/08 10:25 AM
:heart: Thanks to all of you!!:heart:

Zanne I didn't get the pic try again I could use some sand and surf.flowerforyou

pkh's photo
Wed 05/14/08 10:27 AM
flowerforyou awww so sweet

no photo
Wed 05/14/08 10:33 AM
I love when you write! Vicki hope you have a great day .

lurchs_sister's photo
Wed 05/14/08 10:42 AM
((((Pam))))
((((Eric))))

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Thanks to both...

zanne46's photo
Thu 05/15/08 02:13 PM

:heart: Thanks to all of you!!:heart:

Zanne I didn't get the pic try again I could use some sand and surf.flowerforyou


I will..but I can send u some sand and shells...lol..no surf though...sorryyyyyyyyyyyyy..

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jimz's photo
Thu 05/15/08 02:26 PM
Great write, actually, this is my favorite of yours, you go

jimmy

7Kate7's photo
Thu 05/15/08 03:51 PM
What a great write! Made me remember my recent visit to the oral surgeon (they didn't even have an aquarium, yuck).flowerforyou

blonderockermom's photo
Thu 05/15/08 03:57 PM
That was great..really liked it!! :smile: flowerforyou