Topic: Weep
Sharris's photo
Mon 05/12/08 10:06 PM
Weep

a cleansing weep
as the willow laments
and muses as her lace
waves a beckon
draw upon these
waters and feel
your tears shower
and fill the umbrella
that should be held upside down
tears should never
be contained except
in a rain barrel to bathe,
again your soul
weep

Raine Les 4/28/2008

writer_gurl's photo
Mon 05/12/08 10:06 PM
LOve it!!flowerforyou bigsmile

TxsGal3333's photo
Mon 05/12/08 10:10 PM
Very nice tears is how we cleanse the soul.flowerforyou

jimz's photo
Tue 05/13/08 09:55 AM
:heart:

LAMom's photo
Tue 05/13/08 10:17 AM

Weep

a cleansing weep
as the willow laments
and muses as her lace
waves a beckon
draw upon these
waters and feel
your tears shower
and fill the umbrella
that should be held upside down
tears should never
be contained except
in a rain barrel to bathe,
again your soul
weep

Raine Les 4/28/2008



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Dragoness's photo
Tue 05/13/08 10:20 AM
flowerforyou flowerforyou

AngelLight's photo
Tue 05/13/08 12:48 PM
"tears should never
be contained except
in a rain barrel to bathe,
again your soul
weep"


So beautiful, so eloquent Sharris flowerforyou :heart:

no photo
Fri 05/16/08 04:30 AM
:heart: Sadieflowerforyou