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Topic: It was you,,,,Mother
iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Fri 05/09/08 11:48 PM
Mom, I just wanted to tell you something. I love you so very much. It was you who carried me, You who fed me, YOU who loved me. It was you who gave me your care. Even with all you had to bare. It was you who preached GOD'S ways, all my early growing days. It was you who showed me wrong from right. Everyday and night. It was you who shared your mind with me, so that I to, could see It was you who taught me to believe in forever, never a whatever It was you who said to believe, and never to decieve..... It was you who loved me so. And cried when it was my time to go. It was you who made me. What everyone else see's me to be. Mom your still here with me on this earth. Fifty years ago you gave me birth. Now its once again your SPECIAL day. And once again my time to say. HAPPY MOTHER'S DAY MOM, I LOVE YOU MORE today than yesterday, in everyway! No sweeter love of a child could ANY other mother have given. THANK YOU FOR HAVING ME, and LOVING ME. "I LOVE YOU".

Winx Joined Fri 08/31/07 Posts: 39051	Fri 05/09/08 11:53 PM


crazy_lover Joined Tue 03/18/08 Posts: 444	Fri 05/09/08 11:53 PM
wow sweet

Shaden Joined Sat 09/29/07 Posts: 6118	Sat 05/10/08 12:02 AM
Very Nice. I give big kudos to guys who appreciate their mom. Hey T.

darkowl1 Joined Sat 01/12/08 Posts: 13060	Sat 05/10/08 12:05 AM
check your e-mail man.

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Sat 05/10/08 03:42 AM
check your e-mail man. got it man,thanks.....

Greyhound Joined Fri 08/11/06 Posts: 20290	Sat 05/10/08 03:45 AM
How beautiful iam4u. Bless you

Unknow Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 1972	Sat 05/10/08 03:51 AM
amen!

2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Sat 05/10/08 03:55 AM
Terry that was a most wonderful poem for your mother.. My mother did the exact same thing for me.. She is no longer here now, but her spirit will always live on through me, and I will never forget how much she loved me.. Happy Mother's Day Mom.. Thank you Terry for posting this poem, it brought back memories of how wonderful my Mother was when she was here..

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Sat 05/10/08 04:09 AM
Terry that was a most wonderful poem for your mother.. My mother did the exact same thing for me.. She is no longer here now, but her spirit will always live on through me, and I will never forget how much she loved me.. Happy Mother's Day Mom.. Thank you Terry for posting this poem, it brought back memories of how wonderful my Mother was when she was here.. Daniel, WORDS cannot say how much I feel your loss. Knowing she is still with you in your heart and watching you from above is a great comfort. But to not be able to hug each other and to just hear her voice on the phone has to be very saddening...im trully sorry. KNOW that she KNOWS your love is feels all of your heart.

2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Sat 05/10/08 04:16 AM
Terry that was a most wonderful poem for your mother.. My mother did the exact same thing for me.. She is no longer here now, but her spirit will always live on through me, and I will never forget how much she loved me.. Happy Mother's Day Mom.. Thank you Terry for posting this poem, it brought back memories of how wonderful my Mother was when she was here.. Daniel, WORDS cannot say how much I feel your loss. Knowing she is still with you in your heart and watching you from above is a great comfort. But to not be able to hug each other and to just hear her voice on the phone has to be very saddening...im trully sorry. KNOW that she KNOWS your love is feels all of your heart. Thank you Terry, I miss her immensely.. she has been gone now for one year three months, and thirtysix days.. I still talk to her all the time, and I know she hears me... the hardest thing was watching her slip away after she was taken off of life support.. I pray that no one else ever has to go through that kind of pain...

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iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Sat 05/10/08 08:12 AM
Terry that was a most wonderful poem for your mother.. My mother did the exact same thing for me.. She is no longer here now, but her spirit will always live on through me, and I will never forget how much she loved me.. Happy Mother's Day Mom.. Thank you Terry for posting this poem, it brought back memories of how wonderful my Mother was when she was here.. Daniel, WORDS cannot say how much I feel your loss. Knowing she is still with you in your heart and watching you from above is a great comfort. But to not be able to hug each other and to just hear her voice on the phone has to be very saddening...im trully sorry. KNOW that she KNOWS your love is feels all of your heart. Thank you Terry, I miss her immensely.. she has been gone now for one year three months, and thirtysix days.. I still talk to her all the time, and I know she hears me... the hardest thing was watching her slip away after she was taken off of life support.. I pray that no one else ever has to go through that kind of pain... This Mothers Day she wll be with you in spirit Daniel. And GOD holds her close...

Puffins1958 Joined Tue 02/27/07 Posts: 13637	Sat 05/10/08 08:34 AM
Terry... What a wonderful tribute to her.... I'm sure that she LOVED you dearly

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Sat 05/10/08 01:10 PM
That was a wonderful tribute Terry...I'm sure she loved it. Wonderful heart you have.

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iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Sun 05/11/08 10:03 AM
That was a wonderful tribute Terry...I'm sure she loved it. Wonderful heart you have. Thanksman, she is my Giggle, my jiggle my little wiggle,,,lol and STILL can jitter-bug,wink,lol WHICH WE DO TOGETHER,lol

bad_girl Joined Tue 07/17/07 Posts: 67379	Sun 05/11/08 10:27 AM
That was beautiful