Topic: Time
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Thu 05/08/08 05:03 AM
Time keeps tickin away
Night after night-day after day
When we're young seems like forever
Oh how quickly we grow
Become mothers and fathers
And telling our children..
Enjoy being a child
It goes by so fast
Same as we were told
Never thought we'd grow old
And childhood would last
Now here we are..
Adults in this world
Doing our best
For our litle boys and girls

FroznChild's photo
Thu 05/08/08 05:19 AM
Lovely.
Well written, and thought provoking,...
yet, relaxing at the same time.
The flow from beginning to end, was superb actually,
and the idea concise... flowing.

No B.S. :tongue:
That's what I thought. huh
Great Write Jen...
Keep up the Sugar...

2Btrue2One's photo
Thu 05/08/08 06:13 AM

Time keeps tickin away
Night after night-day after day
When we're young seems like forever
Oh how quickly we grow
Become mothers and fathers
And telling our children..
Enjoy being a child
It goes by so fast
Same as we were told
Never thought we'd grow old
And childhood would last
Now here we are..
Adults in this world
Doing our best
For our litle boys and girls


So true, I wrote a poem about Time a while back, been thinking about posting it.. along with the foot note I wrote with it.. amazing how fast time really does go by.. nice poemflowerforyou :heart:

pkh's photo
Thu 05/08/08 06:25 AM
flowerforyou so true

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Thu 05/08/08 08:05 PM
flowerforyou :heart:
Time does fly!