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Topic: I Wish I Could
Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Wed 05/07/08 07:22 AM
I wish I could... Take away all of your pain, To shelve it away So you won't endure it again. I wish I could... Just take it upon myself, Trade places with you And give you your health. I wish I could... Be there, to hold your hand, To walk and share our life Because, I'm your biggest fan. I wish I could... Take it all by chance, Hold you close, under the moon Swayin to a dance. I wish I could... Be the shining armored knight, Come in and save you from all And ride off in the sunlight.

Redsoxfan1 Joined Sat 12/29/07 Posts: 8388	Wed 05/07/08 07:24 AM
I love this one,(((Robert))), Beautifully written!

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Wed 05/07/08 07:47 AM
You are that for her,this made me alittle sad.My love,thoughts and prayers for you both

No1sLove Joined Wed 04/16/08 Posts: 10342	Wed 05/07/08 07:52 AM
I love sweet sorrows ... sigh

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Wed 05/07/08 07:59 AM
robert a fine effort here <----coffee for you

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Wed 05/07/08 10:37 AM
I love sweet sorrows ... sigh I'm with No1sLove Very tender...

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Wed 05/07/08 11:33 AM
Nice write and she deserves it!

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Wed 05/07/08 01:50 PM
Nice write and she deserves it! Thank you all for your wonderful comments. Erica, Pam, No1slove, KC, Angel and Vicki. Ya'll are great.

Sweet_and_Sassy Joined Fri 07/06/07 Posts: 217	Wed 05/07/08 06:22 PM
I wish I could... Take away all of your pain, To shelve it away So you won't endure it again. I wish I could... Just take it upon myself, Trade places with you And give you your health. I wish I could... Be there, to hold your hand, To walk and share our life Because, I'm your biggest fan. I wish I could... Take it all by chance, Hold you close, under the moon Swayin to a dance. I wish I could... Be the shining armored knight, Come in and save you from all And ride off in the sunlight. Oh that is heart wrenching but not in a bad way...its says a lot and even brought a tear to my eye.

Dragoness Joined Wed 10/17/07 Posts: 23320	Wed 05/07/08 06:32 PM
Very nice Robert

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76461	Wed 05/07/08 06:40 PM
That is Beautiful Robert

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Wed 05/07/08 08:25 PM
Beautiful write... (((Robert)))

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Wed 05/07/08 10:35 PM
Beautiful write... (((Robert))) Thanks Susan, Barb, Kristi and Kat. I am glad ya'll liked this one. It's the least I could do for her.

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Thu 05/08/08 09:08 AM
Sighsssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Thu 05/08/08 09:10 AM
Sighsssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss Thanks sweetie..I'm just selfish that way. I would do anything for her.

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Thu 05/08/08 09:12 AM
Sighsssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss Thanks sweetie..I'm just selfish that way. I would do anything for her. I know you would and will Robert

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Thu 05/08/08 09:15 AM
I wish I could... Take away all of your pain, To shelve it away So you won't endure it again. I wish I could... Just take it upon myself, Trade places with you And give you your health. I wish I could... Be there, to hold your hand, To walk and share our life Because, I'm your biggest fan. I wish I could... Take it all by chance, Hold you close, under the moon Swayin to a dance. I wish I could... Be the shining armored knight, Come in and save you from all And ride off in the sunlight. It looks to me as though you HAVE been a shining knight my friend...you've used the joy of your words to take her away.....lovely...

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Thu 05/08/08 09:29 AM
I wish I could... Take away all of your pain, To shelve it away So you won't endure it again. I wish I could... Just take it upon myself, Trade places with you And give you your health. I wish I could... Be there, to hold your hand, To walk and share our life Because, I'm your biggest fan. I wish I could... Take it all by chance, Hold you close, under the moon Swayin to a dance. I wish I could... Be the shining armored knight, Come in and save you from all And ride off in the sunlight. It looks to me as though you HAVE been a shining knight my friend...you've used the joy of your words to take her away.....lovely... Thank you Alicia for that wonderful comment. I believe you just inspired me for another poem.