Topic: I Wish I Could
Wolfeyes58's photo
Wed 05/07/08 07:22 AM

I wish I could...
Take away all of your pain,
To shelve it away
So you won't endure it again.

I wish I could...
Just take it upon myself,
Trade places with you
And give you your health.

I wish I could...
Be there, to hold your hand,
To walk and share our life
Because, I'm your biggest fan.

I wish I could...
Take it all by chance,
Hold you close, under the moon
Swayin to a dance.

I wish I could...
Be the shining armored knight,
Come in and save you from all
And ride off in the sunlight.


Redsoxfan1's photo
Wed 05/07/08 07:24 AM
I love this one,(((Robert))), Beautifully written!flowerforyou :heart:

pkh's photo
Wed 05/07/08 07:47 AM
You are that for her,this made me alittle sad.My love,thoughts and prayers for you both

No1sLove's photo
Wed 05/07/08 07:52 AM
I love sweet sorrows ... *sigh* flowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Wed 05/07/08 07:59 AM
robert
a fine effort here


drinker <----coffee for you

AngelLight's photo
Wed 05/07/08 10:37 AM

I love sweet sorrows ... *sigh* flowerforyou


I'm with No1sLove flowerforyou

Very tender...


lurchs_sister's photo
Wed 05/07/08 11:33 AM
Nice write and she deserves it!flowerforyou

Wolfeyes58's photo
Wed 05/07/08 01:50 PM

Nice write and she deserves it!flowerforyou

Thank you all for your wonderful comments.
Erica, Pam, No1slove, KC, Angel and Vicki. Ya'll are great.

Sweet_and_Sassy's photo
Wed 05/07/08 06:22 PM


I wish I could...
Take away all of your pain,
To shelve it away
So you won't endure it again.

I wish I could...
Just take it upon myself,
Trade places with you
And give you your health.

I wish I could...
Be there, to hold your hand,
To walk and share our life
Because, I'm your biggest fan.

I wish I could...
Take it all by chance,
Hold you close, under the moon
Swayin to a dance.

I wish I could...
Be the shining armored knight,
Come in and save you from all
And ride off in the sunlight.


Oh that is heart wrenching but not in a bad way...its says a lot and even brought a tear to my eye.

Dragoness's photo
Wed 05/07/08 06:32 PM
Very nice Robertflowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Wed 05/07/08 06:40 PM
That is Beautiful Robertflowerforyou

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Wed 05/07/08 08:25 PM
Beautiful write...

(((Robert))) flowerforyou

Wolfeyes58's photo
Wed 05/07/08 10:35 PM

Beautiful write...

(((Robert))) flowerforyou

Thanks Susan, Barb, Kristi and Kat. I am glad ya'll liked this one. It's the least I could do for her.

LAMom's photo
Thu 05/08/08 09:08 AM
:heart: flowerforyou :heart:

Sighsssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

Wolfeyes58's photo
Thu 05/08/08 09:10 AM

:heart: flowerforyou :heart:

Sighsssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

Thanks sweetie..I'm just selfish that way. I would do anything for her.

LAMom's photo
Thu 05/08/08 09:12 AM


:heart: flowerforyou :heart:

Sighsssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

Thanks sweetie..I'm just selfish that way. I would do anything for her.


I know you would and will Robert flowerforyou

no photo
Thu 05/08/08 09:15 AM


I wish I could...
Take away all of your pain,
To shelve it away
So you won't endure it again.

I wish I could...
Just take it upon myself,
Trade places with you
And give you your health.

I wish I could...
Be there, to hold your hand,
To walk and share our life
Because, I'm your biggest fan.

I wish I could...
Take it all by chance,
Hold you close, under the moon
Swayin to a dance.

I wish I could...
Be the shining armored knight,
Come in and save you from all
And ride off in the sunlight.




It looks to me as though you HAVE been a shining knight my friend...you've used the joy of your words to take her away.....lovely...

Wolfeyes58's photo
Thu 05/08/08 09:29 AM



I wish I could...
Take away all of your pain,
To shelve it away
So you won't endure it again.

I wish I could...
Just take it upon myself,
Trade places with you
And give you your health.

I wish I could...
Be there, to hold your hand,
To walk and share our life
Because, I'm your biggest fan.

I wish I could...
Take it all by chance,
Hold you close, under the moon
Swayin to a dance.

I wish I could...
Be the shining armored knight,
Come in and save you from all
And ride off in the sunlight.




It looks to me as though you HAVE been a shining knight my friend...you've used the joy of your words to take her away.....lovely...

Thank you Alicia for that wonderful comment. I believe you just inspired me for another poem.