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MsTeddyBear2u
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Tue 05/06/08 10:14 PM
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Just listening...
*********************** Today as I ventured outside into the sunny day. I walked slowly and quietly through the grass. As my mind drowned out the sounds of traffic, booming music, and loud voices yelling somewhere in the distance. Those sounds became null to me. No longer in exsistance. I began to be consumed into the sounds of much nicer things. The sound of nature singing the day in a most awesome way. The purple and white lilacs singing their scents to the air. I breathed in their music aware of each note. The maple and other relatives softly swooshing their tunes for me. A hickory still bare with winters markings whoosed along in harmony. A black squirrel chattered his warning- not so close, not so close- his lyrics were sung. The little red squirrel in a nearby branch laughing notes to be heard too. Sang to the black squirrel- come on down- I wanna chase you. As the lonesome dove mourning her pretty song on coo. A crow cackeled out his out of tune loo. And Jay he yelled out a note or two. I listened in awe of these wonderouse notes. I heard a cloud singing across the sky. The sun was singing shinningly and joined in by the blues singing sky. The robin was singing to the crickets it seemed. While the cardinal sang to the ladybird of his dreams. I sat in the green grass that was singing - dew wop dew. Heard the ant section word the lyrics of moving too. A bumble bee bassed his buzz in good time. The butterfly with wings swooped a few notes off in good measure. A symphoney of nature was being preformed. The red wing blackbird sang note for note. Chickadees were singing in two time beat. I listened and listened as the music played on. Till the daylight of notes tuned to dusky note ends. The sun sang his last chorus with the sky. The stars and moon raised their voices in the songs chorus end. I thought I heard the bass balloon out with frogs in the blend. I jump up and whispered- ancore, ancore- my many many songsterist friends !!! The Mystro All Mighty took a bough in my heart. Thought I heard Him whisper- "Glad you enjoyed that part..." By: Teddy 05-07-08 
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Very very sweet
And to think you went to a symphony without the need for a ticket  
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it seems your symphony was much different than mine(if you remember the inviting kiss)
but, a nice write filled with beatiful music  
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Yes- I remember and here it is- hope you don't mind me reposting it for you! Its a good one!!!
 I just had to go digging through your posts!
This is KC's poem: ******************** The Inviting Kiss You invite me with a kiss A long deep slow invitation to join you in a symphony of affection We retreat as love the conductor summons the orchestra Blankets cast aside Like the curtains of a great music hall Pillows and clothes line up around us as if an audience prepared for the performance The lights go down The room quiets as the players ready The only sounds to be heard are the light moans of the woodwinds deepening breaths We kiss as hands explore each other Heartbeats quicken and get louder like the bass drums building in the background Kissing your soft skin around your neck and down to your stomach Missing nothing in between Light scents fill the air Matched by the conductors calling for the strings to join in the movement Lower still Your hands find my hair As my tongue flicks its way around begging the flower to unfold in the sunlight that is my desire Your breathing erratic now mixed with soft sighs and deep moans One hand pushing against the headboard the other pulling my head to you Like opposing forces and neither will give ground The orchestra louder and louder by order of the conductor Trying to keep up with your cries You arch your back as the wave of the first chorus works its way to your wanting shore Building and building until it peeks and comes crashing down like the sound of a million pieces of glass hitting the stage and bouncing around in decreasing decibel The maestro is pleased You quiver with each echo rebounding through the hall The sound of the harps dance in the night, picking stars from the heavens and dangling them in front of you Their light reflects in your eyes and I have never seen you more beautiful You pull me to you and the piano coxes the entrance of the sonnet Slowly we move together in perfect harmony We are one Two beings merge to form one So sweet so tender so beautiful Our souls come together where the flesh ends Every breath you take gives me life My heart circulates for we two Our eyes lock half closed Ecstasy Half open Pleasure We stare long and true As our bodies dance to the waltz filling the night air Nothing matters at this moment But the moment I want to share this with you forever You feel the vibrations of the distant storm But you are not ready And as the composer intended On the perfect down beat The conductor turns the page and the arrangement changes You take the first chair As I sit on the stage looking up to the wonder of you Riding me into a short but powerful solo You lift me to your glistening breast Pleasure and pain walk together and neither gets the night off With the rhythm section holding strong My mouth finds your erectness And I bite down Releasing my grasp as the delight turns to ache The horns like your fingernails dig deep into my back As I reach behind you and pull your hair Tilting your head to one side The violins mimic your screams Loves arms are raising and sweeping begging the company to hold each note as if it were the last Trying to draw every ounce of energy from each tone The whirlwind of this piece has the audience silently entranced We roll over as before Twisting and turning Legs fighting for leverage Never stopping Oblivious to all that surrounds us All but the passion that has engulfed the moment There are no children present And words not often spoken escape your swollen lips **** me **** me you urge unto me Pulling me deeper Begging me not to stop Squeezing me with all of your might The crescendo building ever closer Our pace increases Feverishly we continue Moaning and crying out Trying not to reach the end Though we both know we want to The slide of the winds in and out The bows from the strings rising and falling The conductor’s arms Flailing about, commanding everyone to stay I time Building to a deafening climax The drummers beating harder and harder Pounding out the last of the composition Faster and faster the opus moves Finally ending with the piercing sound of two nearly simultaneous earsplitting determined roars of thunder The tiny drops of sweat rain over us And give life to what we share And for just a instant Silence prevails The conductor raises her hands to her lips and blows a kiss to the company Opening loves arms as if to embrace us for all eternity Then bows in thanks to the players who just gave their all The hum of our breathing subsiding As the reverberation of the now faint ending slips away I collapse and melt into you Pulling the covers over us We lie together Holding on to the last of a magnificent recital As I slip into half sleep Thinking One last kiss before we succumb Thinking I can’t wait for tomorrow Thinking There is nothing more beautiful than this Thinking about The next inviting kiss kc08  One that is'nt forgotton thats for sure!
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Just listening... *********************** Today as I ventured outside into the sunny day. I walked slowly and quietly through the grass. As my mind drowned out the sounds of traffic, booming music, and loud voices yelling somewhere in the distance. Those sounds became null to me. No longer in exsistance. I began to be consumed into the sounds of much nicer things. The sound of nature singing the day in a most awesome way. The purple and white lilacs singing their scents to the air. I breathed in their music aware of each note. The maple and other relatives softly swooshing their tunes for me. A hickory still bare with winters markings whoosed along in harmony. A black squirrel chattered his warning- not so close, not so close- his lyrics were sung. The little red squirrel in a nearby branch laughing notes to be heard too. Sang to the black squirrel- come on down- I wanna chase you. As the lonesome dove mourning her pretty song on coo. A crow cackeled out his out of tune loo. And Jay he yelled out a note or two. I listened in awe of these wonderouse notes. I heard a cloud singing across the sky. The sun was singing shinningly and joined in by the blues singing sky. The robin was singing to the crickets it seemed. While the cardinal sang to the ladybird of his dreams. I sat in the green grass that was singing - dew wop dew. Heard the ant section word the lyrics of moving too. A bumble bee bassed his buzz in good time. The butterfly with wings swooped a few notes off in good measure. A symphoney of nature was being preformed. The red wing blackbird sang note for note. Chickadees were singing in two time beat. I listened and listened as the music played on. Till the daylight of notes tuned to dusky note ends. The sun sang his last chorus with the sky. The stars and moon raised their voices in the songs chorus end. I thought I heard the bass balloon out with frogs in the blend. I jump up and whispered- ancore, ancore- my many many songsterist friends !!! The Mystro All Mighty took a bough in my heart. Thought I heard Him whisper- "Glad you enjoyed that part..." By: Teddy 05-07-08
mornin! |
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Morning Oya
(wow 1:48 a.m. here I should be in bed-lol) Naw maybe in a little bit. |
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see my presence here has killed your thread
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Oh kc you silly- its a slow night.
Not much moving around in poetry right now. |
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i just want to get the record straight
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i am not really in california at the moment it's 9 am now
hi Ms T thanks for your encouragement to all your poets here
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Its good to see you back in here.
Look forward to reading more of your writes from any where you are when the sun rises!
We have two wonderfully talented newer poets in here- Sharris and AngelLight- I see you have read them. Its good to see Abra popping in again too. I'd of given up in here awhile back if it were'nt for our poetry section- I'll tell ya!
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it's where all the delicious nutrients are!!! the best part of the meal!!
yep i am enjoying Sharris , very much . she has something
and we have you
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NICE, WE'LL NEED IT ONCE IN A BLOW MOON
Just listening... *********************** Today as I ventured outside into the sunny day. I walked slowly and quietly through the grass. As my mind drowned out the sounds of traffic, booming music, and loud voices yelling somewhere in the distance. Those sounds became null to me. No longer in exsistance. I began to be consumed into the sounds of much nicer things. The sound of nature singing the day in a most awesome way. The purple and white lilacs singing their scents to the air. I breathed in their music aware of each note. The maple and other relatives softly swooshing their tunes for me. A hickory still bare with winters markings whoosed along in harmony. A black squirrel chattered his warning- not so close, not so close- his lyrics were sung. The little red squirrel in a nearby branch laughing notes to be heard too. Sang to the black squirrel- come on down- I wanna chase you. As the lonesome dove mourning her pretty song on coo. A crow cackeled out his out of tune loo. And Jay he yelled out a note or two. I listened in awe of these wonderouse notes. I heard a cloud singing across the sky. The sun was singing shinningly and joined in by the blues singing sky. The robin was singing to the crickets it seemed. While the cardinal sang to the ladybird of his dreams. I sat in the green grass that was singing - dew wop dew. Heard the ant section word the lyrics of moving too. A bumble bee bassed his buzz in good time. The butterfly with wings swooped a few notes off in good measure. A symphoney of nature was being preformed. The red wing blackbird sang note for note. Chickadees were singing in two time beat. I listened and listened as the music played on. Till the daylight of notes tuned to dusky note ends. The sun sang his last chorus with the sky. The stars and moon raised their voices in the songs chorus end. I thought I heard the bass balloon out with frogs in the blend. I jump up and whispered- ancore, ancore- my many many songsterist friends !!! The Mystro All Mighty took a bough in my heart. Thought I heard Him whisper- "Glad you enjoyed that part..." By: Teddy 05-07-08
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Susan, that was magnifico. Superb..I really was into it. Good job.
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great write
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Nice!
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Just listening... *********************** Today as I ventured outside into the sunny day. I walked slowly and quietly through the grass. As my mind drowned out the sounds of traffic, booming music, and loud voices yelling somewhere in the distance. Those sounds became null to me. No longer in exsistance. I began to be consumed into the sounds of much nicer things. The sound of nature singing the day in a most awesome way. The purple and white lilacs singing their scents to the air. I breathed in their music aware of each note. The maple and other relatives softly swooshing their tunes for me. A hickory still bare with winters markings whoosed along in harmony. A black squirrel chattered his warning- not so close, not so close- his lyrics were sung. The little red squirrel in a nearby branch laughing notes to be heard too. Sang to the black squirrel- come on down- I wanna chase you. As the lonesome dove mourning her pretty song on coo. A crow cackeled out his out of tune loo. And Jay he yelled out a note or two. I listened in awe of these wonderouse notes. I heard a cloud singing across the sky. The sun was singing shinningly and joined in by the blues singing sky. The robin was singing to the crickets it seemed. While the cardinal sang to the ladybird of his dreams. I sat in the green grass that was singing - dew wop dew. Heard the ant section word the lyrics of moving too. A bumble bee bassed his buzz in good time. The butterfly with wings swooped a few notes off in good measure. A symphoney of nature was being preformed. The red wing blackbird sang note for note. Chickadees were singing in two time beat. I listened and listened as the music played on. Till the daylight of notes tuned to dusky note ends. The sun sang his last chorus with the sky. The stars and moon raised their voices in the songs chorus end. I thought I heard the bass balloon out with frogs in the blend. I jump up and whispered- ancore, ancore- my many many songsterist friends !!! The Mystro All Mighty took a bough in my heart. Thought I heard Him whisper- "Glad you enjoyed that part..." By: Teddy 05-07-08
"whenever you're near... I hear a symphony, a tender melody holding me closer closer to your heart..." (supremes) A magical musical write....lovely my friend, lovely...
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(((Bearhuggies)))
Hope all of you can exsperiance the preformance of this symphony real soon...
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The beauty of your writes shine
through really well (((MsTeddy)))), wow..I loved this. It was nice of you to pull up KC's as well, holly smokes that was "hot!" Such amazing talent here...
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