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Topic: You Not
Sharris Joined Sun 12/10/06 Posts: 7300	Sat 05/03/08 01:24 PM
You Not Could you not, but love me? Love me as I am. Connected by the threads and strings, Ribbons, silk, you can. Even in the knotted, jumbled Ball of string, Pull the one that's beauty, Brightly colored seen. Usually, it is the one, Woven in and out Keeping it together, Persistent dream, no doubt. Could you not but love me, Love me as I am Jumbled in a great big knot Untie me if you can. Raine Les 5/3/2008

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Sat 05/03/08 01:24 PM
beautiful

Dragonfire201 Joined Fri 12/21/07 Posts: 317	Sat 05/03/08 01:34 PM
that was nice

misstreatunice Joined Tue 10/17/06 Posts: 293	Sat 05/03/08 01:35 PM
nice. someone love me as I am too

mike1957 Joined Tue 01/08/08 Posts: 446	Sat 05/03/08 01:43 PM
nice

Calleigh12 Joined Tue 04/01/08 Posts: 17193	Sat 05/03/08 01:46 PM
so pretty

misstreatunice Joined Tue 10/17/06 Posts: 293	Sat 05/03/08 02:06 PM
hello there

CyPoet Joined Fri 01/11/08 Posts: 12494	Sat 05/03/08 03:50 PM


MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Sat 05/03/08 08:37 PM
I got a mental picture of this big ball of string and some good natured man is un tangeling it slowly but surely!

Sharris Joined Sun 12/10/06 Posts: 7300	Sat 05/03/08 11:29 PM
A Patient man..it's the lace that gets em everytime.

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Sat 05/03/08 11:43 PM

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