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Topic: The Good Woman
hikerchick Joined Sat 12/22/07 Posts: 13206	Thu 05/01/08 03:59 PM
She lives a life beyond reproach She's definitely graced She prays all day and night it seems She tells the world that she's the queen Of all that she surveys But when you disagree with her She turns into a psycho She growls and foams She writes bad poems Tell me where did her light go?

Lily0923 Joined Sun 12/02/07 Posts: 20429	Thu 05/01/08 04:03 PM
I think this is wonderful It is a great thing That which you do for your art. and for the rest of us who live in a world where our reality is based in.......reality

tanyaann Joined Mon 12/03/07 Posts: 32220	Thu 05/01/08 04:04 PM


hikerchick Joined Sat 12/22/07 Posts: 13206	Thu 05/01/08 04:05 PM Edited by hikerchick on Thu 05/01/08 04:05 PM
I think this is wonderful It is a great thing That which you do for your art. and for the rest of us who live in a world where our reality is based in.......reality shouldn't this be BOLD?

hikerchick Joined Sat 12/22/07 Posts: 13206	Thu 05/01/08 06:25 PM
We can all do the bump

catchme_ifucan Joined Fri 11/03/06 Posts: 24221	Thu 05/01/08 07:44 PM
**giggles*** Love & Light to all!

hikerchick Joined Sat 12/22/07 Posts: 13206	Thu 05/01/08 07:44 PM
**giggles*** Love & Light to all! I thought you might enjoy this one.

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Thu 05/01/08 08:12 PM


TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76469	Thu 05/01/08 08:46 PM
Awesome one I must say

oya9 Joined Fri 04/25/08 Posts: 265	Thu 05/01/08 10:06 PM
hiker.....you don't even know me that well!!!!!!!!!!! i'm moved

hikerchick Joined Sat 12/22/07 Posts: 13206	Thu 05/01/08 10:12 PM
hiker.....you don't even know me that well!!!!!!!!!!! i'm moved You're so vain I bet you think this poem is about you... Did you like the psycho part best?

oya9 Joined Fri 04/25/08 Posts: 265	Thu 05/01/08 10:46 PM
hiker.....you don't even know me that well!!!!!!!!!!! i'm moved You're so vain I bet you think this poem is about you... Did you like the psycho part best?

VestalVirgin Joined Thu 04/03/08 Posts: 19	Fri 05/02/08 08:10 PM
hmmm..very interesting. Reminds me of a psycho I met on this very spot. Nah..It couldn't be. She must have been banned for good by now.

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Sat 05/03/08 06:35 AM
That was an interesting piece. DO the goats know about this psycho? Have you tried medication? lololol.

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Sat 05/03/08 07:03 AM Edited by AngelLight on Sat 05/03/08 07:03 AM
"She writes bad poems Tell me where did her light go?" nothing like a REALLY bad poem. here here i suspect her light still shines, but perhaps some green eyed monster may envy it. who REALLY knows these things for sure? LOL!

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Sat 05/03/08 07:11 AM
sounds like me good write

hikerchick Joined Sat 12/22/07 Posts: 13206	Sat 05/03/08 07:43 AM
sounds like me good write OMG - nothing like you. You are wonderful!

hikerchick Joined Sat 12/22/07 Posts: 13206	Sat 05/03/08 07:46 AM
That was an interesting piece. DO the goats know about this psycho? Have you tried medication? lololol. The goats are going to need medication soon if they can't find a way out of that pen. I have them locked and holding for now and they are frustrated. I hear complaints all day and night. They are m-a-a-a-a-a-d!

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Sat 05/03/08 07:46 AM
sounds like me good write OMG - nothing like you. You are wonderful! as you are...lol just been called psycho many times by a few in my life now

hikerchick Joined Sat 12/22/07 Posts: 13206	Sat 05/03/08 07:47 AM
sounds like me good write OMG - nothing like you. You are wonderful! as you are...lol just been called psycho many times by a few in my life now Oh, me too! Can you believe it??