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Topic: Lover, Lover
AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Wed 04/30/08 11:08 AM
Lover, Lover, from where have you come? You touch my heart strings; I come undone. You’re more beautiful than the setting sun! If this is a lottery, I think I’ve won. I look at you & see birds of paradise. I see the moonlight shining in your eyes. You hold me close. I cannot say goodnight. All I want to do is keep holding you tight. The teardrops of rain have nothing on you. Your transparency shows nothing but Truth. You tenderly soothe & bring out my youth. I care so deeply; I thank God there’s you. Your sensual ways have me going crazy. Your sexuality is totally amazing. I love you even stronger than I did before. Pour out your starlight; I’d like to see more. Lover, Lover, from where have you come? It must be heaven; you’re my lucky seven. You’re lovelier than the rising sun! Lover, Lover we’ve only begun. JDS 04/30/08

1956deluxe Joined Thu 12/06/07 Posts: 8559	Wed 04/30/08 11:09 AM
Very Nice!

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Wed 04/30/08 11:11 AM
beautiful

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Wed 04/30/08 11:12 AM
Wow Jaylin! You never cease to amaze me with your poetry! Always a pleasure to read a new one. If you don't have a book published be sure to let me know when you do!

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76393	Wed 04/30/08 11:13 AM
Awesome shsh now to find that lover

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Wed 04/30/08 11:19 AM


AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Wed 04/30/08 11:22 AM
Wow Jaylin! You never cease to amaze me with your poetry! Always a pleasure to read a new one. If you don't have a book published be sure to let me know when you do! Ty so much J! (((((Ty MsTeddy, Txs, P, and 1956)))))

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Wed 04/30/08 03:17 PM
Beautiful as always...reminds me of Karen Carpenter right now...We've Only Just Begun....Keep up the beautiful writes sweetie for you have a way of wonderful expression.

rush2001 Joined Thu 04/17/08 Posts: 2577	Wed 04/30/08 03:19 PM
You always write such beautiful poems.

Redsoxfan1 Joined Sat 12/29/07 Posts: 8388	Wed 04/30/08 03:20 PM
very nice! I like that! Well done!

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Wed 04/30/08 06:00 PM
Beautiful as always...reminds me of Karen Carpenter right now...We've Only Just Begun....Keep up the beautiful writes sweetie for you have a way of wonderful expression. Ty for your encouragement (((Robert)))

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Wed 04/30/08 06:00 PM
You always write such beautiful poems. And you are always so kind!

rush2001 Joined Thu 04/17/08 Posts: 2577	Wed 04/30/08 06:01 PM


AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Wed 04/30/08 06:01 PM
very nice! I like that! Well done! Glad you liked it Red. Ty

No1sLove Joined Wed 04/16/08 Posts: 10342	Wed 04/30/08 06:02 PM
That's just lovely AngelLight!

ShadesofGray07 Joined Wed 04/30/08 Posts: 15	Wed 04/30/08 06:02 PM
that's really beautiful!!!

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Wed 04/30/08 06:14 PM
Ty No and Shades...I appreciate the love

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Thu 05/01/08 10:15 AM
Again such beauty flows from your Soul

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Thu 05/01/08 10:21 AM
And again, such beauty flows from (((yours)))

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