I cant say I don't love you
I cant say I don't care
I cant say that we're hopeless,
that we move in sweet dispair
I cant say that my heart
is mine, and mine alone
Since each sweet smile you give to me
Another piece you own

I cant say I'd forget you
In a passing crowd
I cant say what you've done to me
Should ever be allowed
You've opened up my heart
And filled my heart with dreams
Asolitary part of me
The world has never seen

So take me back in time
To the first night that we met
The sweetest kiss I've ever had
One i never could forget
If our love was caught on tape,
I'd rewind and play it back
To capture every moment
And put memories back on track

I never thought I'd feel like this
Like everything I do
Has to be for both of us
My hearts now built for two
So listen to my words
They're only meant to be sincere
I'll always love you deep inside
This love wont dissapear

Nice

Very good

This is very nice, there is a lot in this piece that I moves me. It really captures the depth of a true and passionate love.

I was particularly touched by the following lines.



This is a vivid verbose painting of the vulnerability of a heart that is hopelessly in love.

That was really good.

thank you everyone :)
hope u all like it

Nice write!

Very well done!!!