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FaithfulOne78 Joined Mon 11/19/07 Posts: 15313	Tue 04/29/08 09:32 AM
You told me that you loved me that you would always care you told me to let you in my heart and there you would always be The first time that you hit me I blamed myself,that I should learn to listen The second time you hit me,I fell down to my knees,asking you,begging you please,no more. You picked me up,said you were sorry,you didn't mean a thing I told you to back off don't ever touch me again, I saw the anger in your eyes as you smiled and said I had another thing coming. I told you that I loved you but I couldn't live this way I told you to look deepin into your heart so that you could finally see, why I left and what it was you did to me.

Winx Joined Fri 08/31/07 Posts: 39051	Tue 04/29/08 09:37 AM


pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Tue 04/29/08 09:38 AM
Good write I'm glad you left been there done that.You deserve so much better

AngelMapper Joined Fri 04/25/08 Posts: 524	Tue 04/29/08 09:38 AM
Beautifully sayed ^^

FaithfulOne78 Joined Mon 11/19/07 Posts: 15313	Tue 04/29/08 09:40 AM
Winx thank you pkh thank you Angel thank you

dodger1953 Joined Wed 03/19/08 Posts: 590	Tue 04/29/08 09:40 AM
You told me that you loved me that you would always care you told me to let you in my heart and there you would always be The first time that you hit me I blamed myself,that I should learn to listen The second time you hit me,I fell down to my knees,asking you,begging you please,no more. You picked me up,said you were sorry,you didn't mean a thing I told you to back off don't ever touch me again, I saw the anger in your eyes as you smiled and said I had another thing coming. I told you that I loved you but I couldn't live this way I told you to look deepin into your heart so that you could finally see, why I left and what it was you did to me. come here and let me give you a hug!

rush2001 Joined Thu 04/17/08 Posts: 2577	Tue 04/29/08 09:40 AM


rush2001 Joined Thu 04/17/08 Posts: 2577	Tue 04/29/08 09:41 AM
Let me at him.

FaithfulOne78 Joined Mon 11/19/07 Posts: 15313	Tue 04/29/08 09:41 AM
(((dodger))) thanx rush thank you

FaithfulOne78 Joined Mon 11/19/07 Posts: 15313	Tue 04/29/08 09:42 AM
Let me at him. Yeah you and about 50 others!

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76412	Tue 04/29/08 09:42 AM
If if makes you cry tears of pain then it is not love at all. good write

FaithfulOne78 Joined Mon 11/19/07 Posts: 15313	Tue 04/29/08 09:43 AM
If if makes you cry tears of pain then it is not love at all. good write thank you and your very right no more for him.

Redsoxfan1 Joined Sat 12/29/07 Posts: 8388	Tue 04/29/08 09:43 AM
Good write, Valerie! I actually have been thru that!

FaithfulOne78 Joined Mon 11/19/07 Posts: 15313	Tue 04/29/08 09:44 AM
(((Red))) thanx girl...and for you for bein strong too

Redsoxfan1 Joined Sat 12/29/07 Posts: 8388	Tue 04/29/08 09:46 AM
(((Red))) thanx girl...and for you for bein strong too Thanx, I'm trying!!

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Tue 04/29/08 10:03 AM
Wrapping loving arms around you

FaithfulOne78 Joined Mon 11/19/07 Posts: 15313	Tue 04/29/08 10:09 AM
Wrapping loving arms around you Thanx ((((LA))))

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Tue 04/29/08 10:18 AM
Threw your write- I pray others will find the strength to leave too...

Noden Joined Mon 06/11/07 Posts: 5050	Tue 04/29/08 10:24 AM
Seems to me we both made a very good choice in life, as I too have just left the same abuse, good for you, and stay strong.... Any time you need a friend, we are all here...holding each other strong, just lean on one of us or all as a bunch of support, hell I do, and I love the friends I've made here.... Bravo!!!Girl!!!

FaithfulOne78 Joined Mon 11/19/07 Posts: 15313	Tue 04/29/08 10:29 AM
(((TeddyBear))) thank you (((Noden))) thanx girl