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Topic: Our Place
pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Sun 04/27/08 05:35 PM
A hard day at work I give you that smirk As you walk in the door You know what's in store Were going to our special place Let me put a smile on your face No if ands or maybes Come lay with me baby The moment I see you my mind misbehaves The touch of your warmth is what I crave Your favorite panties,with all the lace Slowly come up our bodies embrace My heart is racing and beating so fast Lost in our place I want this to last Theres no place on earth I'd rather be Then wrapped in your arms for all eternity Making love all night,you look at my face And know you've taken me to our favorite place

codelockbox Joined Mon 12/31/07 Posts: 1237	Sun 04/27/08 05:36 PM
Very nice thank you.

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76464	Sun 04/27/08 05:37 PM
Humm it is getting warm in here shshshhshs time for a shower

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Sun 04/27/08 05:41 PM


iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Sun 04/27/08 05:48 PM
WOW,,pkh,,,you little firecracker,lol Thanks for showing us YOUR place,wink,lol

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Sun 04/27/08 06:23 PM
Ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm Damnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn Ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Sun 04/27/08 06:51 PM
Humm it is getting warm in here shshshhshs time for a shower lol I run out blushing. Thank you Codelockbox

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Sun 04/27/08 07:31 PM
WOW,,pkh,,,you little firecracker,lol Thanks for showing us YOUR place,wink,lol Terry and Lee thankyou

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Sun 04/27/08 07:32 PM
Ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm Damnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn Ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm hi sweetie,as I blush and run out

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Sun 04/27/08 07:39 PM
WOW Pammy....you know how to start a fire don't ya?? That was good.

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Sun 04/27/08 08:59 PM
I would read this right before I go to sleep... Good write (((Pam)))

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Sun 04/27/08 10:41 PM
A hard day at work I give you that smirk As you walk in the door You know what's in store Were going to our special place Let me put a smile on your face No if ands or maybes Come lay with me baby The moment I see you my mind misbehaves The touch of your warmth is what I crave Your favorite panties,with all the lace Slowly come up our bodies embrace My heart is racing and beating so fast Lost in our place I want this to last Theres no place on earth I'd rather be Then wrapped in your arms for all eternity Making love all night,you look at my face And know you've taken me to our favorite place ummm i dont know what to say Pam ummm um

PunkRockPrincesS Joined Sat 04/26/08 Posts: 168	Sun 04/27/08 10:42 PM
love it

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Mon 04/28/08 04:39 AM
WOW Pammy....you know how to start a fire don't ya?? That was good. thank you Robert kinda was thinking about the chair

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Mon 04/28/08 04:40 AM
I would read this right before I go to sleep... Good write (((Pam))) morning sunshine...lol I'm still blushing

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Mon 04/28/08 04:41 AM
A hard day at work I give you that smirk As you walk in the door You know what's in store Were going to our special place Let me put a smile on your face No if ands or maybes Come lay with me baby The moment I see you my mind misbehaves The touch of your warmth is what I crave Your favorite panties,with all the lace Slowly come up our bodies embrace My heart is racing and beating so fast Lost in our place I want this to last Theres no place on earth I'd rather be Then wrapped in your arms for all eternity Making love all night,you look at my face And know you've taken me to our favorite place ummm i dont know what to say Pam ummm um morning Kevin...lol me either just one of those days

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Mon 04/28/08 04:42 AM
love it hi sweetie...thankyou for the flowers To all the writers Punkrockprincess is new..so look at her work a young soul with beautiful talent and speaks from the heart..

2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Mon 04/28/08 05:33 AM
Ummm, Pam, in truth, we are all only human.. very very nice poem m'lady..

lilangel2 Joined Wed 03/05/08 Posts: 9096	Mon 04/28/08 05:34 AM
very sensual

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Fri 05/02/08 04:00 PM
Great write Pam Fantastic flow...