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Topic: someone once asked....
justmenoel Joined Thu 08/02/07 Posts: 3137	Wed 04/23/08 06:40 PM
someone once asked me where id like to go i said id like to walk in the garden where only true love grows someone once asked me what it is id like to see i said id like to see the heart to which i hold the key someone once asked me what it is id like to hear i said id like to hear i love you with my soul rather than my ears someone once asked me what id like to find i said id like to find the one to call forever mine someone once asked me if you had only one wish what would it be i said i do not wish, i just follow my dreams you once asked why i never gave up on finding love thats true i said because i knew i was falling in love with you

chey0813 Joined Thu 04/10/08 Posts: 1	Wed 04/23/08 06:44 PM
That is so beautiful!!!

ShellyinAZ Joined Mon 12/03/07 Posts: 480	Wed 04/23/08 06:44 PM
well done!

justmenoel Joined Thu 08/02/07 Posts: 3137	Wed 04/23/08 06:46 PM
thank you

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Wed 04/23/08 06:48 PM
beautiful nice to see you again

ShellyinAZ Joined Mon 12/03/07 Posts: 480	Wed 04/23/08 06:49 PM
welcome

justmenoel Joined Thu 08/02/07 Posts: 3137	Wed 04/23/08 06:50 PM
beautiful nice to see you again ty

Derekkye Joined Sat 12/22/07 Posts: 3427	Wed 04/23/08 06:50 PM
Isn't love grand.

justmenoel Joined Thu 08/02/07 Posts: 3137	Wed 04/23/08 06:51 PM
Isn't love grand. it is

cdanny47 Joined Thu 01/03/08 Posts: 2328	Wed 04/23/08 06:51 PM
someone once asked me where id like to go i said id like to walk in the garden where only true love grows someone once asked me what it is id like to see i said id like to see the heart to which i hold the key someone once asked me what it is id like to hear i said id like to hear i love you with my soul rather than my ears someone once asked me what id like to find i said id like to find the one to call forever mine someone once asked me if you had only one wish what would it be i said i do not wish, i just follow my dreams you once asked why i never gave up on finding love thats true i said because i knew i was falling in love with you So that is a yes on getting married?????

justmenoel Joined Thu 08/02/07 Posts: 3137	Wed 04/23/08 06:53 PM
someone once asked me where id like to go i said id like to walk in the garden where only true love grows someone once asked me what it is id like to see i said id like to see the heart to which i hold the key someone once asked me what it is id like to hear i said id like to hear i love you with my soul rather than my ears someone once asked me what id like to find i said id like to find the one to call forever mine someone once asked me if you had only one wish what would it be i said i do not wish, i just follow my dreams you once asked why i never gave up on finding love thats true i said because i knew i was falling in love with you So that is a yes on getting married????? someday

cdanny47 Joined Thu 01/03/08 Posts: 2328	Wed 04/23/08 06:55 PM
Just make sure you do it right the first time..

justmenoel Joined Thu 08/02/07 Posts: 3137	Wed 04/23/08 06:56 PM
Just make sure you do it right the first time.. ill def try

goalie39 Joined Fri 04/18/08 Posts: 8	Wed 04/23/08 06:58 PM
definitely a lot of passion in your words...very much enjoyed from one poet to another...thank you and keep smiling.

justmenoel Joined Thu 08/02/07 Posts: 3137	Wed 04/23/08 06:59 PM
definitely a lot of passion in your words...very much enjoyed from one poet to another...thank you and keep smiling. thank you

goalie39 Joined Fri 04/18/08 Posts: 8	Wed 04/23/08 06:59 PM
you are very welcome.

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Wed 04/23/08 10:09 PM


iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Wed 04/23/08 10:11 PM
WOW, The beauty of a womens soul.

nightruler Joined Fri 10/05/07 Posts: 653	Wed 04/23/08 10:12 PM
Damn,I wish I wrote that good work

justmenoel Joined Thu 08/02/07 Posts: 3137	Thu 04/24/08 07:15 AM
ty all