Topic: Vice
enderra's photo
Mon 04/21/08 06:19 AM
I wish you would
tear out my heart
with your precious
perfect little hands
pull it out
still beating
and suckle it
like a breast
my breast
as you did
enabling me
to speak Phoenician
as dead as
it is
I want to watch
you enter it
and pump it stronger
than it forces
life through me
pin it down
prop it against walls
in stairways
tell it things
sweet little licentious things
with no intent
let it drop
still beating
barely


David1943's photo
Mon 04/21/08 06:27 AM
My goodness - this is absolutely brilliant and so very evocative. Well done!:heart: :heart: :heart:

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Mon 04/21/08 06:32 AM
This post is steaming!
Good write! drinker

TxsGal3333's photo
Mon 04/21/08 07:38 AM
Humm sweet write bigsmile