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Topic: Dear John.....
pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Mon 04/21/08 05:28 AM
I'm sorry to have to let you go in a letter But 8 months now and it's not any better In my mind by now love would of grown But all we share are some conversations on the phone I gave you my heart it was yours to keep But you were not ready to take that leap The things we shared when we first met Are memories I'll keep and never forget It's been one sided for way to long I tried to be patient,loving and strong But after last night and our talk It's time for me to take that walk I tried to stand by you,and hope things would get better 8 months later nothings changed so I'm writting this letter Please don't call my heart can't do this anymore When I hear your voice my heart melts,my mind is tore Read this letter,know I love you but have to go Maybe in time your heart will know And maybe again our love will grow

granny2four Joined Tue 03/18/08 Posts: 70	Mon 04/21/08 05:29 AM
awesome..............

Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Mon 04/21/08 05:32 AM


CyPoet Joined Fri 01/11/08 Posts: 12494	Mon 04/21/08 05:39 AM
Beautiful write though very saddening.

SKPCG Joined Mon 03/03/08 Posts: 14708	Mon 04/21/08 05:47 AM
Nicest "kiss off" letter I've seen.... I'm sorry if it's based on reality in your world...

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Mon 04/21/08 06:30 AM
(((Pam))) Hope things get better for you sweetie!

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76412	Mon 04/21/08 07:32 AM
Pam that was awesome very heartfelt but very good. Girl you have grown so much within your writing and within your self in the last year. Sometimes it is hard to let go of the things we love but harder to hold on to them.

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Mon 04/21/08 08:05 AM
I'm sorry to have to let you go in a letter But 8 months now and it's not any better In my mind by now love would of grown But all we share are some conversations on the phone I gave you my heart it was yours to keep But you were not ready to take that leap The things we shared when we first met Are memories I'll keep and never forget It's been one sided for way to long I tried to be patient,loving and strong But after last night and our talk It's time for me to take that walk I tried to stand by you,and hope things would get better 8 months later nothings changed so I'm writting this letter Please don't call my heart can't do this anymore When I hear your voice my heart melts,my mind is tore Read this letter,know I love you but have to go Maybe in time your heart will know And maybe again our love will grow Yep I love the Soul in you,,, Beautiful

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Mon 04/21/08 10:25 AM
OHHHHHHH SWEETIE! Sending prayers and love your way and hoping you find your happy soon!

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Mon 04/21/08 01:07 PM
thanks all for your thoughts...sometimes it's harder to hold on and you know you have to let go

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Mon 04/21/08 01:10 PM
Oh Pam, I know how you feel sweetheart. That closure letter is the hardest. You just have to go with your feelings and your heart though.

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Mon 04/21/08 01:11 PM
pam

EarthSprite Joined Mon 04/02/07 Posts: 12114	Mon 04/21/08 01:20 PM
(((pam))) Wrapping you in my arms and sending you big hugs...

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Thu 04/24/08 10:04 PM
Robert,Kevin,Kim thank you all

Knightime Joined Tue 12/04/07 Posts: 1848	Fri 04/25/08 12:55 AM
if I'm gonna get a dear john letter thats the one i want ... grinz