Topic: So Long...Farewell...Goodbye...
Wolfeyes58's photo
Wed 04/16/08 05:39 PM
That was another good write KC. Well done.

kc0003's photo
Wed 04/16/08 07:32 PM





Oh My KC!

Nice write!flowerforyou flowerforyou


thank you

this was the middle of a story i was working on last night
i somehow deleted the other 16 pages sad


Is there no way to get them back? How sad that is!sad sad
You are truely talented my friend!

Before I forget... I saw a picture of a man the other day that I truely believe is you but your back was turned so I'm not sure.


It wasn’t at the post office was it?



laugh laugh laugh (((KC)))

Another great write!!! flowerforyou :heart:


thank you T Bear

flowerforyou :heart:

kc0003's photo
Wed 04/16/08 08:11 PM

That was another good write KC. Well done.



thanks robert


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Thu 04/17/08 01:00 AM

i love how you capture emotion
i hope you can find the rest of it kc


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flowerforyou

pkh's photo
Thu 04/17/08 07:30 AM
That was simply awesome,I really enjoyed so and could relate...well doneflowerforyou

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Thu 04/17/08 08:22 AM

All these years together and this is how you stand before me. Not a hint of sorrow or, of sadness. Not even a trace of a tear.

Well, what did I expect?

Thinking of all I wish to say to you….
Knowing it will do no good…

With that cold sickle heart. Turning it on so many unsuspecting (as you call them) victims. You wield it in random but, you pick and cut them with surgical precision. Have you stopped to survey the damage?

When you reflect on your life and you ask yourself if you were ever truly loved, remember me. Recall all I have endured. Remember that even at the end I loved you with all of my being. I will most likely die loving you.
How sad is that?
Not only for me but, for us too.
Remember how I was to you. I always supported you, encouraged you, and helped you when you asked. I didn't tell you who you are or who to be. I simply loved you for you.

I gave you the room to grow the room to change and to find who you are. Some how; you interpreted this as weakness. I tried to shield you from the harsh reality of this sometimes cruel world and you viewed it as dishonest and disrespectful.

Just when did you become the pillar respect?
You; with your tarnished crown and newly developed vestige of moral standing.

I feel sorry for the others that will come into your world, for the celestial comets of karma will circle your universe and return to you one day...

So as I approach you for the last time, I take your elegant hands of deceit and hold them as gently as ever. I fight my tears and silently kiss you on the cheek. I turn away never to look back but, knowing, as I walk away, you will catch a hint of the last breath I shall ever exhale for you. You can taste it, smell it and sense it in the moisture resting so hopelessly on your beautiful face.

Dry it with the memory of our past.

(I envision three swipes of your hand.)

(first)....so long
(second)...farewell
(third)....goodbye


kc08




Oh heartbreaking...lovely.....KC this was truly excellent.....:heart: :heart: :heart:

kc0003's photo
Thu 04/17/08 11:16 AM

That was simply awesome,I really enjoyed so and could relate...well doneflowerforyou


awww thanks pam
you are always so kind

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kc0003's photo
Thu 04/17/08 01:43 PM


All these years together and this is how you stand before me. Not a hint of sorrow or, of sadness. Not even a trace of a tear.

Well, what did I expect?

Thinking of all I wish to say to you….
Knowing it will do no good…

With that cold sickle heart. Turning it on so many unsuspecting (as you call them) victims. You wield it in random but, you pick and cut them with surgical precision. Have you stopped to survey the damage?

When you reflect on your life and you ask yourself if you were ever truly loved, remember me. Recall all I have endured. Remember that even at the end I loved you with all of my being. I will most likely die loving you.
How sad is that?
Not only for me but, for us too.
Remember how I was to you. I always supported you, encouraged you, and helped you when you asked. I didn't tell you who you are or who to be. I simply loved you for you.

I gave you the room to grow the room to change and to find who you are. Some how; you interpreted this as weakness. I tried to shield you from the harsh reality of this sometimes cruel world and you viewed it as dishonest and disrespectful.

Just when did you become the pillar respect?
You; with your tarnished crown and newly developed vestige of moral standing.

I feel sorry for the others that will come into your world, for the celestial comets of karma will circle your universe and return to you one day...

So as I approach you for the last time, I take your elegant hands of deceit and hold them as gently as ever. I fight my tears and silently kiss you on the cheek. I turn away never to look back but, knowing, as I walk away, you will catch a hint of the last breath I shall ever exhale for you. You can taste it, smell it and sense it in the moisture resting so hopelessly on your beautiful face.

Dry it with the memory of our past.

(I envision three swipes of your hand.)

(first)....so long
(second)...farewell
(third)....goodbye


kc08




Oh heartbreaking...lovely.....KC this was truly excellent.....:heart: :heart: :heart:


thank you my dear...
your reply proves it must have been...happy

:heart:

blonderockermom's photo
Fri 04/18/08 03:36 AM
Kc...Amazing write!!..flowerforyou flowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Fri 04/18/08 11:29 AM
Edited by kc0003 on Fri 04/18/08 11:35 AM

Kc...Amazing write!!..flowerforyou flowerforyou


thank you so much blondemom

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TxsGal3333's photo
Fri 04/18/08 11:36 AM
Wow kc are you in my head or what have been there done that. But.........I promise you somewhere down the road those memories will no longer haunt you. For there will come a time
that you will see that it was not meant to be. A new one will appear and grab your heart like it has never been grabbed. Sure sit there and nod your head and say under your breath no way. But..........mark my words for when the day does come you will hear in a Texas Accent I told ya honey!!!bigsmile flowerforyou

Awesome write you amaze me with your words!!bigsmile

7Kate7's photo
Fri 04/18/08 11:44 AM
Wonderful write KC. One I can relate too well.flowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Fri 04/18/08 01:08 PM

Wow kc are you in my head or what have been there done that. But.........I promise you somewhere down the road those memories will no longer haunt you. For there will come a time
that you will see that it was not meant to be. A new one will appear and grab your heart like it has never been grabbed. Sure sit there and nod your head and say under your breath no way. But..........mark my words for when the day does come you will hear in a Texas Accent I told ya honey!!!bigsmile flowerforyou

Awesome write you amaze me with your words!!bigsmile



kristi my friend...
if and when you do get to say those words i know we shall a fine laugh together...

untill that day............

flowerforyou :heart:

kc0003's photo
Fri 04/18/08 01:09 PM

Wonderful write KC. One I can relate too well.flowerforyou


thank you for posting 7kate7

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kc0003's photo
Fri 04/18/08 09:05 PM


i love how you capture emotion
i hope you can find the rest of it kc


S

flowerforyou


thanks stef be safe on your trip

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kc0003's photo
Tue 04/22/08 08:00 AM

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7WQ6Q_65qck

Although try not to cringe when you hear the note that one boy can hit, shewwwww, I don't have them and they tried to go further up...laugh laugh laugh laugh



thanks to you I am having nightmares with this song playing in the background

aaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!

laugh laugh laugh

kc0003's photo
Thu 04/24/08 09:56 PM
Edited by kc0003 on Thu 04/24/08 09:57 PM
thank you all

flowerforyou

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Thu 04/24/08 10:37 PM
hey kc
having trouble staying on we will call you if that is ok

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Thu 04/24/08 11:10 PM
Beautiful=]

I love reading your writes:):wink:

kc0003's photo
Fri 04/25/08 12:08 AM

Beautiful=]

I love reading your writes:):wink:


awww thanks girl

you are too kind

flowerforyou :heart: