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Topic: one day closer
TonyV Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 422	Mon 04/14/08 02:51 PM
One day closer Each day closer till I find, that woman who will be mine Not to own or possess but to grow with and caress. To be her strengh and her be mine,she would be that treasured find To feel her heartbeat apon my chest, wrapped in my arms as we rest.Holding her hand as we go, hoping that time will go real slow.To look in her eyes and see her light,just love her with all of my might. Hmmm today brought me one day closer

bttrflyv2 Joined Mon 12/04/06 Posts: 1880	Mon 04/14/08 02:53 PM
wow...thats very deep.....

TonyV Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 422	Mon 04/14/08 02:55 PM
thanks a hope and thought

EarthSprite Joined Mon 04/02/07 Posts: 12114	Mon 04/14/08 02:56 PM
*sigh*

radiance Joined Sat 08/04/07 Posts: 127	Mon 04/14/08 02:58 PM
so beautiful

TonyV Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 422	Mon 04/14/08 02:59 PM
have faith Sisters thats what the poems about

msdestinbooty Joined Wed 03/12/08 Posts: 1915	Mon 04/14/08 03:08 PM
That was really good!!

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Mon 04/14/08 03:58 PM
Nice write and great way to look at it as- One day closer...

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76393	Mon 04/14/08 05:21 PM
Humm One day closer to the one you will love a life time with sweet music to my ears.

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Mon 04/14/08 05:37 PM
One dat closer is one les day to spend alone,,,Good write man...

TonyV Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 422	Mon 04/14/08 06:32 PM
thanx its encouraging to hear from you all

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Mon 04/14/08 10:01 PM
What a great write,,, Beautiful

ArtGurl Joined Sun 04/08/07 Posts: 17722	Mon 04/14/08 10:25 PM
day by day ... step by step ... ...a longing ... coming closer ... May your steps be few til you find your dream fulfilled ...

TonyV Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 422	Tue 04/15/08 04:54 AM
Thank you artgurl have a great day

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