Topic: A lonesome heart sighs... | |
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Edited by
MsTeddyBear2u
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Sat 04/12/08 09:53 PM
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Dreaming of an exsistance all the time.
Wondering why I'm invisiable at the drop of a rhyme. Showing my heart in every way. Only to be ignored for another day. Plenty of love to share within me. Sorry to see that most want to be free. Wondering what is it that I seem to do wrong. Seems I don't know how to play anyones song. Loneliness is drowning to feel. I keep hoping for something real. Perhaps anothers heart to share. Why does'nt someone care. Tierd of hope being let down. Leaving me a heart that frowns. Years of nothing have hardened me. I used to think I wanted to stay free. I rather share moments of life. Than feel this pain and all the strife. I have been trying to live once more. Only to be left behind on the shore. I watch the ships sailing out to sea. And often wonder why not me. By: Teddy 04-13-08 |
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Beautifil Lady...
You are not invisible... It is them that can not see... |
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hello and goodnight earth,ms teddybear
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Night James...
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theirs someone out there it just takes time to make someone for an extra special person like you. you write beautifully
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Awww Susan...it seems we are part of the same club...I love Teddybears if that helps and would like to have one to hold right now. Beautiful poem though.
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all this mushy stuff is boring
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all this mushy stuff is boring Why'd you reply then...friends helping friends is not mushy. |
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Real?
They say the proof is in the pudding. I'm guessin they're not talkin' snack-packs. No pop a top and instant gratification. How do any who play the game of life know, is this real, "you reap what you sow"? I've known many that seed fields with kindness, and all the good things in life, yet wander in blindness. Does that absolute YES with another exist? Or do I need more time with self and reflection in the mix? What one has learned, can be tested and tried. Do ya jump and take a chance, or find a new stride. Can anyone answer these questions, but self? There's definitely no answer for those buried on a shelf. All ya can do is grow, learn, and oh yes laugh and live; and like the miners of old shake, rattle, and roll that sieve. What works for you keep the rest let it go. Cause fantasy never appeases the soul.............. I love you Ms.T. You deserve the best this world has to offer and sometimes that takes time and a whole lotta siftin'. |
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awww sweetie we all see the beautiful soul you are.I believe in you and it will happen believe and never lose hope.it will happen when you least expect it..hugs
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Dreaming of an exsistance all the time. Wondering why I'm invisiable at the drop of a rhyme. Showing my heart in every way. Only to be ignored for another day. Plenty of love to share within me. Sorry to see that most want to be free. Wondering what is it that I seem to do wrong. Seems I don't know how to play anyones song. Loneliness is drowning to feel. I keep hoping for something real. Perhaps anothers heart to share. Why does'nt someone care. Tierd of hope being let down. Leaving me a heart that frowns. Years of nothing have hardened me. I used to think I wanted to stay free. I rather share moments of life. Than feel this pain and all the strife. I have been trying to live once more. Only to be left behind on the shore. I watch the ships sailing out to sea. And often wonder why not me. By: Teddy 04-13-08 Sighssssssssssssssssssss,,,, ((( Ms Teddy )))) Your soul is so pure,, your heart so warm,,, You my Angel,, Yes you,,, He will see the you I see and Whammmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm you my lady will be knocked right off your feet,, He is out there,,, Believe,, |
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James- thankyou for reading
(((EathSprite)))- They sure can be blind sometimes. 1000111010123- Thankyou so much for reading my rants. Glad you like them. Don't cry. (((Robert)))- You can have one of my teddys any time you need one. One of these days we will quit this club hey! phatgirl2003- Welcome to JSH! Mushy stuff is our specialty in this writting section! Just thought I'd worn you! If mushy stuff is boring- I'm Queen of BORE! I must also warn you that I tend to hug people in here too... (((DifferentKindofWench)))- Thankyou for the poem. I guess we have to do alot of siftin' to find the gold! Luv ya lady! (((pkh)))- Was just sad to relize how invisible I am to some. Kudos with Vicki and Daniel! (((LaMom)))- Yeah- well I have'nt got patience anymore. LOL... |
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(((MsTeddy))) (((Wench)))
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and to have a poem answer a poem...you've not been left on shore, sounds like you have wonderful friends on here!! it will come to you one day, and they will be very lucky
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and to have a poem answer a poem...you've not been left on shore, sounds like you have wonderful friends on here!! it will come to you one day, and they will be very lucky |
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