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Is it wrong I dream of your face?
That I wish you were in my place? That you'd understand, that you'd take my hand... and long for our sweet embrace? Is it wrong I imagine our kiss? That my fantasy was more than a wish? Your lips on my skin, I'd let it sink in... If only I was someone you'd miss. Is it wrong my feelings I hide? The passion held only inside, the love I could shout, let my secret out... If not for my foolish pride. |
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beautiful like you
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wow thats beautiful
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Thanks
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Thanks |
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very nice!
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Brilliant
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I think WE both had that inner mind going on,,lol
GREAT Poem,,,, |
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Thanks guys for reading it!!! I appreciate the replies
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So The secret must be who she's thinking about?
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So The secret must be who she's thinking about? Sssshhhh! |
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very sweet
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That was beautiful twilight...I enjoyed that.
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i have always said you should post more...
this only proves my point |
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That was nice
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Nice!
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very nice...don't let your pride get in the way
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"oh i like that"
secret eh? you do not say... think that it someday might go away? the funny thing is even when word is out the secret still lies within our heart no one no where can really see the beauty deep within you and me our secrets are energy and warm our lives none at all can see them but we can feel inside care to bare? dare to share? there's nothing like it anywhere... |
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Very nice TT
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