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LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Fri 04/11/08 08:59 AM
Pondering the Moments of his return home She Walks the Shore in the Moon's Glow Reminscing the Long Ago....... A journey she's walked guided by Love Ocean Air Crisp and so Pure As Is the Love between these two... Circle of Life Built to stand time Painted Canvas Image's holding in time A Spiritual Dance under the Moon Freedom of Body, Soul & Mind Cultivating Moments Still to show Core of Existance Core of Strength Non-Ending Devotion Between this Women and her Man.... Circle of Life is full of Hope Here Stands a Women we've all come to Know Beauty and Devotion Fill her Life Call of the Ocean fill her Nights Breathless as she awaits his flight.... Traveling to a Land he once Knew Familiar is the Tune Silence steps,,, Beholding Her Eyes Deep whispers of the Longing Home,,, Yes He Replys....... Home......... ((( Karma & Jess ))))) My Love I send to you both,,, May the Sun forever shine upon your Souls and the Ocean breeze fill your nights, Hugs,,, to you both, Welcome Home Karma,, Safe Journey my friend,,

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Fri 04/11/08 09:11 AM
((((Denise)))) This is touching and lovely m'dear

Gypsy41 Joined Tue 05/15/07 Posts: 123359	Fri 04/11/08 09:24 AM


pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Fri 04/11/08 09:29 AM
wonderful write...wishing you both the best

karmafury Joined Sun 11/12/06 Posts: 10156	Fri 04/11/08 10:16 AM
Awww!!! Thank you Denise. Yes I really do feel like I'm finally going home.

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Fri 04/11/08 10:26 AM
you're going to let her get the better of you aren't you?

karmafury Joined Sun 11/12/06 Posts: 10156	Fri 04/11/08 10:29 AM
you're going to let her get the better of you aren't you? Get the better, get the worst. Get the good, get the bad. But then when I'm bad and worst .......... It's better.

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Fri 04/11/08 10:45 AM


TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76393	Fri 04/11/08 11:48 AM
Awesome write for two great people, I hope it is all you ever dreamed of Karma

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Fri 04/11/08 12:32 PM
Very good indeed Denise...hope the best for them both.

will6 Joined Thu 09/07/06 Posts: 1212	Fri 04/11/08 01:37 PM
Nice Denise.

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Fri 04/11/08 01:53 PM
Nice poem, and GREAT PEOPLE,,,,WOW.... Lifes journey will never open fully, until we ALL. RUN to be with its completion,,,,,GO KARMA, and catch him Jess. Through friends to LOVE to FOREVER...

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Fri 04/11/08 02:57 PM
Very, very well done, they popped in my mind immediately with this. Be happy, be well and oooohhhhh yes, may you continue to be surrounded in the love you both so gloriously project...... Um, love ya, the mushy wench

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Fri 04/11/08 04:04 PM
To the journey home!

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Fri 04/11/08 07:50 PM
Home is where the Heart is,,, Hugs Karma,, Sending you and Jess Blessings and love

cmeasiam Joined Fri 06/08/07 Posts: 141	Fri 04/11/08 08:47 PM
So beautiful

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Sun 04/13/08 03:25 PM
Thank You

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Thu 04/17/08 08:36 AM
Karma wishing you a safe flight and give Jess Lotsa Hugs & Kiss's for me,,,

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76393	Thu 04/17/08 09:01 AM
Is he there yet?

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Thu 04/17/08 09:30 AM
Is he there yet? Is he there yet? Is he there yet? (kids in back seats... ) (((Karma and Jess)))