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Topic: The hiden heart
sugarjen Joined Tue 11/07/06 Posts: 2265	Mon 04/07/08 07:47 PM
The night so dark has fallen And i am falling ..falling The stars so bright are shining And i am hiding..hiding Within the shadows that are cast I remain steadfast in my tracks Hiding my heart,hiding my soul Afraid to love Afraid to let go Fear of being hurt Fear of feeling without worth So my heart remains hiden Covered in layers so deep By tears hardened to stone Every time i weep

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Mon 04/07/08 07:49 PM
beautiful

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jonny63 Joined Sat 03/08/08 Posts: 5229	Mon 04/07/08 08:05 PM
My For you

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Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Mon 04/07/08 08:39 PM
Well spoken/written......Change focus the tears will then cauterize and help heal wounds rather than flint knapping the tears into weapons against self. The logical understanding happens before the emotional. Once the logical is reached, you'll learn to pay attention to the self talk and very, very slowly you find the glorious aspects of you and better yet, you actually learn to love them. Just a little past experience of mine for ya.

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