ok people, i was asked to write something about a playground on acid
not sure if this what the person had in mind but, this is what came out
so, here you go...



psychedelic masquerade
the blacktop
that’s been freshly laid
rainbows
seem to float
on high
in a teardrop
you swim by

multi flavored
dog food
solar system
solitude
intercybertary space
suffocated
human race

and i
recall
a
playground
where we...
had room for all
the boys and girls
it was our little
playground world
room for all the
boys and girls
such a lovely little
playground world

tin foil
passages
clutter
your mind
nutcracker soldiers
feed you fine
from the jar
mother hides
on the back
of the shelf
look for me there
and find
yourself
a greek goddess
future
wraped in a
sheet
with cellophane
sneekers
on porcupine
feet

and i
recall
a
playground
but nothing is
what it seems
to be
on the playground
that i used
to see
which ones
are boys
and which are girls
this is not our
little playground
world


kc08

kc ?????
what the....
oh my
that is out there

"multi flavored
dog food
solar system
solitude
intercybertary space
suffocated
human race"

original at least

S

thanks mirror

your response took guts

WoW!!! Well I truely believe you have out done yourself on this one (( kc )))

yeah but i am not sure if that is good or bad

Its good,,, Really Good...

Great write

thanks mom

thank you too dear

stef
just wait it will creep up on you

((( kc ))))
I have a request,,, Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm Dancing Under the Willow,, As seen through my eyes,,,

Please, I would be so honored

ok mom
anything for you

That was amazing...I think you hit the nail on the head. I was right there feeling every moment as I read it.

Excellent

thank you i appreciate that

man i think that one is on acid

once again you have a couple of great lines

a greek goddess
future
wraped in a
sheet
with cellophane
sneekers
on porcupine
feet

i really like this one

D

you were right kc

it has grown on me

S

thanks ( d )
i appreciate your post

thank you very much
that means alot to me