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Topic: last call
kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Fri 04/04/08 11:47 AM
My favorite is the first stazna. I can taste the smoke in the air as I listen to a crowd of slightly toasted bar patrons and hot blues in the background.....love it kc! Wonderful write!! thank you Alicia glad this one got through... of course you know how i regard your comments

meandu2 Joined Thu 10/11/07 Posts: 490	Fri 04/04/08 12:07 PM
very nice kc very real as well i liked the irony of the last line D

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Fri 04/04/08 12:11 PM
You have to be a better typer than me,lol,lol Your story was great and you are the man,,bravo....

ArtGurl Joined Sun 04/08/07 Posts: 17722	Fri 04/04/08 12:16 PM
I so look forward to reading more of your work. I am always transported ... and I love those moments where time and space disappear ... and for that moment ... I am there ... in the story. Thank you!

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Fri 04/04/08 12:27 PM
You have to be a better typer than me,lol,lol Your story was great and you are the man,,bravo.... type, no,no i peck but i would never claim to be a better pecker than anyone thank you for the kind words

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Fri 04/04/08 01:01 PM
I so look forward to reading more of your work. I am always transported ... and I love those moments where time and space disappear ... and for that moment ... I am there ... in the story. Thank you! thank you AG i appreciate your words very much

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Fri 04/04/08 01:22 PM
You have to be a better typer than me,lol,lol Your story was great and you are the man,,bravo.... type, no,no i peck but i would never claim to be a better pecker than anyone thank you for the kind words I think someoen still has my poem in their head No pun,,,,in-tend-ed.lol

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Fri 04/04/08 01:27 PM
You have to be a better typer than me,lol,lol Your story was great and you are the man,,bravo.... type, no,no i peck but i would never claim to be a better pecker than anyone thank you for the kind words I think someoen still has my poem in their head No pun,,,,in-tend-ed.lol unfortunately the oven didn’t do the trick

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Fri 04/04/08 04:09 PM
very nice kc very real as well i liked the irony of the last line D thanks d glad to see you got it

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Fri 04/04/08 04:20 PM
Excellent brought back memories for me in my bartending years,awesome as always

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Fri 04/04/08 05:39 PM
Excellent brought back memories for me in my bartending years,awesome as always thank you Pam i am sure you could tell a few good stories about this as well

meandu2 Joined Thu 10/11/07 Posts: 490	Sat 04/05/08 12:42 AM
very nice kc very real as well i liked the irony of the last line D thanks d glad to see you got it kc... great read i had to come back to it we will call you tomorrow D

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Sat 04/05/08 01:33 PM
very nice kc very real as well i liked the irony of the last line D thanks d glad to see you got it kc... great read i had to come back to it we will call you tomorrow D glad to see you two got through the storm safely s d

Sitngrin Joined Tue 01/15/08 Posts: 1078	Sat 04/05/08 01:37 PM
I really like that my friend Very nicely done ~Den

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Sat 04/05/08 03:36 PM
I really like that my friend Very nicely done ~Den thanks den i appreciate that

meandu2 Joined Thu 10/11/07 Posts: 490	Sat 04/05/08 11:45 PM
hey kc pick up your phone... D

meandu2 Joined Thu 10/11/07 Posts: 490	Sun 12/14/08 02:04 PM
you have been "vaulted" we cant wait to see you S & D