I never had to worry, if I could trust you from day to day...
Every since I started loving you, those kinda of feelings, they just went away...
and I'm starting to think that I might love you more then I can say...
cause my eyes upon your pretty smile, they always play,
and my thoughts they just travel right to you, and stay,
And I'm like hey...
I love you...

It doesn't really say the things, I think that it should let you know out loud...
How can it let you know, that I'll always love you so, and no matter what you do babe, I'm always proud,
how does ... I love you,
let you know, I'm true,
let you know I'm floating, on a cloud?
Well it really, seems to me...
this is how love should be
I love you, well, isn't that,
just what we vowed?

Some people, let love come and go...
and that isn't, how love should grow.
That isn't the way that I was raised at least...
Love isn't all the same,
it's like a baking game...
you can't make your love rise,
without your yeast...

And to me, yeast it the girl...
that really makes me whirl.
That really makes me laugh, makes me grin...
and if saying I love you...
well, that's all I got to do...
It may not say the world...
but I'll say it again.
I love you.

With Equescent thoughts...
FroznChild

Nice poem but Im thinking of yeast infections now!!

Girl That just wasn't right,lol


I still liked it man...but NOW, I don't want a Donut....lol


THANKS GYPSY.......lol

yeah um yeast doesn't go so well with a girl in the same sentence...

I especially liked this part of the poem :Some people, let love come and go...
and that isn't, how love should grow.
That isn't the way that I was raised at least...

Actually, I wasn't raised that way but it does make sense.

Lol... thanks RainbowTrout, for having something positive to say!
we're all raised differently.