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Tue 01/20/09 03:17 PM


As I lay and wait for sleep
I listen to the rhythm of my heart beat
1.2.3.4
1.2.3.4.
1.
and then no more
when I awake the very next morning
I see that the rain drops have started pouring
10.9.8.7
10.9.8.7
10.
and then I realize that this is heaven
A tear falls from my right cheek
I speak
1.2.3.4.7.8.9.10
1.2.3.4.7.8.9.10
1.
what happened between four and seven?
bigsmile nicedrinker
Kind of different I know, but it was fun writing.drinker

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Tue 01/20/09 03:15 PM

drinks drinks drinks drinks drinks drinks
Cheersdrinker

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Tue 01/20/09 03:15 PM

pppllldddd

I condemn you for writing something i enjoyed


thank you thoughflowerforyou
hmmmm...... well at least you enjoyed it bigsmile
and you're welcome

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Tue 01/20/09 02:22 PM
As I lay and wait for sleep
I listen to the rhythm of my heart beat
1.2.3.4
1.2.3.4.
1.
and then no more
when I awake the very next morning
I see that the rain drops have started pouring
10.9.8.7
10.9.8.7
10.
and then I realize that this is heaven
A tear falls from my right cheek
I speak
1.2.3.4.7.8.9.10
1.2.3.4.7.8.9.10
1.
what happened between four and seven?

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Tue 01/20/09 02:19 PM
Today.

This Day.

I go.

But.

Before I .

Leave.

I want you.

To Know.

Without you.

Here.

I'm so cold.

By: Roberto Loera

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Tue 01/20/09 02:17 PM
Lets play a game
It was not me
and that is not a stain
Lets play a game
I did not f*** her
I hardly know her name
Lets play a game
You're not going to leave me
I'm not the one that's to blame
Lets play a game
I'll love you forever
and you'll do the same
Lets play a game

By: Roberto Loera

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Tue 01/20/09 10:13 AM

99 percent of lawyers give the rest a bad name..
rofl rofl That's rich

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Tue 01/20/09 10:12 AM
Good stuffdrinker

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Tue 01/20/09 10:09 AM
drinker :thumbsup:

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Tue 01/20/09 10:07 AM

Curious hands exploring
Bristled parchment feeling
Lips sucking fingers
Dampening
Priming
Preparing them
For a sliding silky survey
As hungry lips slip softly over
The pulsing column of your throat
Down
…down
Downy fine
Landscape
Quivering with each
Flick of a curious tongue
Tasting salty sweet sweat
From your body
Taut
…Firm
…..Smooth
…….Strokes
I complete ...
... My masterpiece ...

Eyes closed in
Triumphant delight
I am an artist born
Created
Perfected
In this white hot
Night
My talents
Acquired
Inspired and
Honed
Upon the
Canvas …
… of you …




jan 19 2009


frustrated There she goes again setting the bar way above my head.
tongue2 flowers flowers It's da Bomb explode

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Tue 01/20/09 09:56 AM



Takes the kind Gentlemans hand,,,
Bravoooooooooooo flowers
blushing And off we go

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Mon 01/19/09 10:38 PM


MsWiz you can poke me anytime

I had to say itbigsmile :wink:

*Walks Away*


<<---grabs Romeo and tosses him in the ManCage along with the rest of the captives. Come on Gorgeus Girl, we gots us anotha one!
slaphead rofl

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Mon 01/19/09 07:41 PM





at least no one's steping on your toes :wink:


<<----has steel toed hiking boots bigsmile
no wonder no one wants to dance with you noway
:laughing:


Oh hush you! :angry:
scared

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Mon 01/19/09 07:09 PM



at least no one's steping on your toes :wink:


<<----has steel toed hiking boots bigsmile
no wonder no one wants to dance with you noway
:laughing:

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Mon 01/19/09 06:04 PM
Yes indeed, you can't live with'em, you can't live without..... well you just can't live with'em tongue2

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Mon 01/19/09 05:46 PM
Edited by RawB on Mon 01/19/09 05:48 PM
You should tell them that I said to "explode SHUT THE HELL UPexplode" with love
laugh

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Mon 01/19/09 05:42 PM
asleep

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Mon 01/19/09 05:21 PM
Well that's the beauty of music, there's no wrong way.
Play it, sing it, write it and if you enjoy it..... there's no criticism I could give you.

Good luck and Rock onshades

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Mon 01/19/09 05:11 PM
flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

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Mon 01/19/09 05:06 PM
It's hard to say.
Do you have a sample uploaded somewhere perhaps?
It would help to hear how it's played