Topic: See, Hear and speak No evil
RawB's photo
Tue 01/20/09 02:22 PM
As I lay and wait for sleep
I listen to the rhythm of my heart beat
1.2.3.4
1.2.3.4.
1.
and then no more
when I awake the very next morning
I see that the rain drops have started pouring
10.9.8.7
10.9.8.7
10.
and then I realize that this is heaven
A tear falls from my right cheek
I speak
1.2.3.4.7.8.9.10
1.2.3.4.7.8.9.10
1.
what happened between four and seven?

MirrorMirror's photo
Tue 01/20/09 02:30 PM

As I lay and wait for sleep
I listen to the rhythm of my heart beat
1.2.3.4
1.2.3.4.
1.
and then no more
when I awake the very next morning
I see that the rain drops have started pouring
10.9.8.7
10.9.8.7
10.
and then I realize that this is heaven
A tear falls from my right cheek
I speak
1.2.3.4.7.8.9.10
1.2.3.4.7.8.9.10
1.
what happened between four and seven?
bigsmile nicedrinker

RawB's photo
Tue 01/20/09 03:17 PM


As I lay and wait for sleep
I listen to the rhythm of my heart beat
1.2.3.4
1.2.3.4.
1.
and then no more
when I awake the very next morning
I see that the rain drops have started pouring
10.9.8.7
10.9.8.7
10.
and then I realize that this is heaven
A tear falls from my right cheek
I speak
1.2.3.4.7.8.9.10
1.2.3.4.7.8.9.10
1.
what happened between four and seven?
bigsmile nicedrinker
Kind of different I know, but it was fun writing.drinker

LAMom's photo
Tue 01/20/09 08:00 PM
5,6 you pick up sticks ... laugh
ooopppssss sorry first thing to come to my tired mind


Your spirit sang and your Soul Listened

flowers

pkh's photo
Tue 01/20/09 08:27 PM
nice

RawB's photo
Tue 01/20/09 08:36 PM

5,6 you pick up sticks ... laugh
ooopppssss sorry first thing to come to my tired mind


Your spirit sang and your Soul Listened

flowers
biggrin bravo, the perfect addition biggrin

RawB's photo
Tue 01/20/09 08:37 PM

nice
Thank you