Topic: pig man inside me
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Mon 01/19/09 04:48 PM
(new song i'm tinkering with)

i try not to be the pig man inside me
but when women come along
and i laugh and sing song
that bruttish thing's come out n' possessed me

more and more women
see more and more dogs
i try, i try, i try, i try, i try

but i smile - its instinct
and i play the dating game.
there's always a brief instance that i think i've overcame

but the pig inside me
takes his time and aims to kill
striking down each woman that i see and meet and meat
so i run, defeated. i run depressed and still

i'm afraid that one day, the price that i pay
will be greater than just some hurt feelings
and the pig inside me, that feral wild dog
will be the end of everything that's good in me


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Mon 01/19/09 04:52 PM
noway flowerforyou glasses smokin

MirrorMirror's photo
Mon 01/19/09 04:53 PM

(new song i'm tinkering with)

i try not to be the pig man inside me
but when women come along
and i laugh and sing song
that bruttish thing's come out n' possessed me

more and more women
see more and more dogs
i try, i try, i try, i try, i try

but i smile - its instinct
and i play the dating game.
there's always a brief instance that i think i've overcame

but the pig inside me
takes his time and aims to kill
striking down each woman that i see and meet and meat
so i run, defeated. i run depressed and still

i'm afraid that one day, the price that i pay
will be greater than just some hurt feelings
and the pig inside me, that feral wild dog
will be the end of everything that's good in me





drinks

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Mon 01/19/09 05:02 PM
i'd welcome any criticism....

i'm exploring a more 'fiona apple' / 'regina specktor'
style as of late

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Mon 01/19/09 05:06 PM
It's hard to say.
Do you have a sample uploaded somewhere perhaps?
It would help to hear how it's played

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Mon 01/19/09 05:07 PM
no, i've never recorded my songs..

in truth - this is my first time sharing lyrics with the public

=o)



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Mon 01/19/09 05:21 PM
Well that's the beauty of music, there's no wrong way.
Play it, sing it, write it and if you enjoy it..... there's no criticism I could give you.

Good luck and Rock onshades