(new song i'm tinkering with)

i try not to be the pig man inside me
but when women come along
and i laugh and sing song
that bruttish thing's come out n' possessed me

more and more women
see more and more dogs
i try, i try, i try, i try, i try

but i smile - its instinct
and i play the dating game.
there's always a brief instance that i think i've overcame

but the pig inside me
takes his time and aims to kill
striking down each woman that i see and meet and meat
so i run, defeated. i run depressed and still

i'm afraid that one day, the price that i pay
will be greater than just some hurt feelings
and the pig inside me, that feral wild dog
will be the end of everything that's good in me

i'd welcome any criticism....

i'm exploring a more 'fiona apple' / 'regina specktor'
style as of late

It's hard to say.
Do you have a sample uploaded somewhere perhaps?
It would help to hear how it's played

no, i've never recorded my songs..

in truth - this is my first time sharing lyrics with the public

=o)

Well that's the beauty of music, there's no wrong way.
Play it, sing it, write it and if you enjoy it..... there's no criticism I could give you.

Good luck and Rock on