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Tue 01/09/07 01:31 AM
one day i hope to get as good as you are, i really like it

alonesaior's photo
Tue 01/09/07 01:29 AM
thanks, i'm trying to get back into writing. thanks a lot

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Tue 01/09/07 01:26 AM
Just one more thing, i just wrote this and posted it, i'm not a good
speller and missed some punctuation, please over look that. Thanks.

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Tue 01/09/07 01:25 AM
Felo de se

The Sun spilled her glory unto the horizon,
waking all those to be awoken,
Warming all those to be awake,
chilled from the night.

With a faint smell of coffee beans,
A smile found its way upon my face.
How sweet the air taste,
How soft the ground felt.

the love birds song,
Coaxing me into a trance,
Rememboring the days,
To perfect to be true,
A care only for love,
Never wanting the tears,
The tears that came so few,
To perfect the day seemed,
Though how perfect,
It really was.


the sun rose to show her might,
to carry out her daily duties.
A smile found it way upon my face,
How perfect it was,
To see her rise,
once more.






(Felo de se means "Fellon of himself" to commit suicide back in early
English was considered a felon and a shameful death, hope you like this
better than my "A day to dream" and "a nights Disappointment." you look
the meaning at wikipedia.com, type in "felo de se" it should come up)

alonesaior's photo
Sun 01/07/07 06:20 PM
to kind. thanks a lot.

alonesaior's photo
Sat 01/06/07 10:52 PM
For just one day,
I wish to be,
Unseen to dream.

To stay alone,
Undjudge and unnottice,
Undhinged and unregreting,
Unafraid and unloved.

I wish to dream,
to be unseen,
to walk alone,
to hind my thoughts.

A day to dream,
Of what could of been,
Not a day,
To dream of regret.

A day to dream,
Of the pain inside.

of what could of been
If only I could,
Be unseen,
To Dream again.

alonesaior's photo
Sat 01/06/07 10:34 PM
thanks.

alonesaior's photo
Sat 01/06/07 10:17 PM
A fallen sun rises me from my sleep,
another depressing night ahead,
filled with the disappointment,
Of a lover long gone,
of a body long lost,
hidden by the shadows.
to the stars that shine so bright,
bring me my pleasure,
of dying into the day,
so i can close my eyes,
hiding my disappointment,
from all who cares,
From all I hate

alonesaior's photo
Sat 01/06/07 10:16 PM
The Nights Disappointment By CAB

A fallen sun rises me from my sleep,
another depressing night ahead,
filled with the disappointment,
Of a lover long gone,
of a body long lost,
hidden by the shadows.
to the stars that shine so bright,
bring me my pleasure,
of dying into the day,
so i can close my eyes,
hiding my disappointment,
from all who cares,
From all I hate