Me, Myself and I. That's all you have to say? Nice try/troll anyway. About your poem it could be abridged 6 to 8 rows. And still your poem could easily keep the same thought and message.

Nice writing Pansytilly

I put some thoughts together too.

"About love"

Some days it grows inside my heart
Sometimes it leaves me all alone
I'��ve used it I'��ve heard it

Some people are fond of it
Other people can’t stand it
We have taken care of it

It can be misjudged
It had been misunderstood
It'��s been used extremely wrong

You can blame it
It still doesn'��t complain about us
What we have done or haven'��t done
You can'��t own it

It'��s a short word
Very powerful word
It�'s my shelter and my shield

That word is your key
It'��s the key to my door
It will guide your words to my heart

The famous little word

When You're Gone

There isn'��t any sorrow
When you'��re with me

There isn'��t any joy
When you’re gone

I am like a stone in an ocean
Without the shore
Without your lap

When I am with you
You are like a warm wave

So high you rise
Forced by your desire
Your restless and endless search

To find the emotion
The pureness of kindness

To find the hope and love
Which will last all the storms

When the tides of pleasure
Arrives to your eyes

You reach your peak somewhere
At the moment of clarity

Your arms are getting softer
You move lower
I can see all without seeing anything

The time has paralysed

tlme �

The Daybreak In Her Eyes

"Look how they run!" she said
I watched
Across the field
Down the slope
That leads to the little brook
I didn't see anything
I couldn'��t say a word I just look her
I pray the Sun to testify
My silent thoughts
How beautiful she was
Then the wolfs run to our sight
And only thing I could do was watching her
"Look how they run!" she said again

2010 �