MY POEM repost

The exterior
Is a reflection
Of the interior

The strength
I posses
Simply inferior

I stumble
Through my trouble
Grumble as I tumble

And never do I feel superior

Popeye

To me it sounds kinda scary, a little creepy, but catchy... I like it

Outkast

thank u all 4 ur comments, Super Moon is 2night b sure to check it out

thank u luvmeforlife ;)

I can make no mistake
No way will I fail
Writing through blizzards, rainstorms, and hail

Sometimes it is hard to write how I feel
Though I am glad I do
It is my soul that I heal

And if you somewhere, sometime,..
Should smile at my words,...

Know that my poem is not only mine,...but also yours

Threads of reality are stretched
My life is tearing at the seems
Shadows of love and happiness
Torment all my dreams

Love is in the air, though I'm in outer space
Love is a running game, and I never give chase

Life lines, so sad their blue
The more time elapses, the more sure I am, of what I must do

My eyes burn and so they must be shut
Blue line run on forever, and so they must be cut

My screams of protest are all in vain
The world is ****ing deaf, and I'm going insane

Darkness and silence are mistaken for peace
I feel cold, I shiver,...then all signs of life cease

When not allowed to love...
..then what should I do?

For nights seem long...
..when not accompanied by you

Why keep myself from you...
..when you are all I really want

My mind fills with regret...
..my soul is a vacant lot

Thank you 1000111010123 :)

Thank You all for your feedback, I love writing my favorite creative outlet :)

While I slept last night,
Spiders crawled into my ear,
They wove webs to catch good dreams,
And to instill fear

Fish swim in my belly,
And lay their rotten eggs,
And though they never hatch,
They soon sprout legs

The eggs walk in circles,
Making my stomach churn,
Then exit through my urethra,
Making my penis burn

I try to wake up with all my might,
Webs now cover my eyes,
Resulting in my loss of sight,

As I lay in bed paralyzed with fear,
Helpless, unable to shed even one single tear...

And just when I question how much more I can take,
The morning sun hit my face,... and I awake

Fighting to my eyes dry,
The green keeps me high,
Wasted as time flies by,
MISSING YOU

Watching my hands as they shake,
Raised to my head to settle it's quake,
All the while my heart aches,
MISSING YOU

In bed I hold my pillow tight,
Often recalling the sight,
Our bodies spooning in the night,
MISSING YOU

It's time like this I feel empty...without bliss,

I contemplate our fates...and how they twist,

Obsessively staring at knives...then at my wrists,
MISSING YOU

The reward is covered in rust
I searched for love...
..and all I found was lust

The life I led was such a waste
I ran after dreams...
..I never should have chased

The help I pray for never came
And though I may feel stupid ...
..still I pray, I pray just the same

The powers that be, are all out to lunch
They will dine on my hope...
..then wash it down with Hawaiian Punch

Reflections and revisions
I regret my decisions

Dedication to meditation
I throw onto paper my manifestation

Religion and submission
And endless repetition

Inclusion into the delusion
I will re-echo my convolution

Ours was nonexistent
We tried and both resisted
We searched forever and still we missed it
The past is now revisited

I would write about being happy
I would write about being in love
I would write beautiful flowers and a blue sky above

I could write about holding hands
I could write about our first kiss
I could write about picnics in the park and our afternoon bliss

I should write about all these wonderful things,...
And maybe even more...

But I'm alone and feeling rotten,...
Rotten to my core.