WayTooCurious


WayTooCurious Joined Thu 11/13/08 Posts: 1	Sat 11/15/08 09:47 AM Topic: Newly posted, need feedback.
Very nice - you set the bar high and keep it there throughout, it will keep the not-so-confident at bay, but I believe this is part of the desired effect... only observation is mostly stylistic: Paragraphs are your friends, break the text up a little, it becomes more readable. And yes, you're quite fetching Shine on,