OfTheLake


OfTheLake Joined Wed 10/15/08 Posts: 412	Thu 11/27/08 05:27 AM Topic: Prologue to a Fantasy Novel I did
I give it a 3, because like a lot of the RPG based fantasy I've read, the characters are built in such a way that you don't really care about them. The images are good, but I want to, WANT TO KNOW, what happens to the characters. I want know on some level I connect with them. Develop the flaws and quirks that make us real and not 2 dimensional.

OfTheLake Joined Wed 10/15/08 Posts: 412	Thu 11/27/08 05:08 AM Topic: Holly is here!
Ladies. I bow and give thanks. That's appropriate.

OfTheLake Joined Wed 10/15/08 Posts: 412	Thu 11/27/08 05:02 AM Topic: word association for advanced intermediates - part 11
smoooooth

OfTheLake Joined Wed 10/15/08 Posts: 412	Wed 11/26/08 03:54 AM Topic: word association for advanced intermediates - part 11
bold

OfTheLake Joined Wed 10/15/08 Posts: 412	Tue 11/25/08 09:16 PM Topic: word association for advanced intermediates - part 11
OK

OfTheLake Joined Wed 10/15/08 Posts: 412	Tue 11/25/08 09:10 PM Topic: word association for advanced intermediates - part 11
rated

OfTheLake Joined Wed 10/15/08 Posts: 412	Tue 11/25/08 08:56 PM Topic: word association for advanced intermediates - part 11
low

OfTheLake Joined Wed 10/15/08 Posts: 412	Tue 11/25/08 08:50 PM Topic: word association for advanced intermediates - part 11
trust

OfTheLake Joined Wed 10/15/08 Posts: 412	Tue 11/25/08 08:36 PM Topic: word association for advanced intermediates - part 11
empath

OfTheLake Joined Wed 10/15/08 Posts: 412	Tue 11/25/08 08:31 PM Topic: word association for advanced intermediates - part 11
walk

OfTheLake Joined Wed 10/15/08 Posts: 412	Tue 11/25/08 08:16 PM Topic: Sci-fi Book List 1
William Gibson- cyber punk novels Charles de Lint- Fantasy Robert Holdstock- Fantasy Ursula Leguin- Fantasy Stephen r. Donaldson- Thomas Covenent series And if you're into the complex- Schild's Ladder by Greg Egan

OfTheLake Joined Wed 10/15/08 Posts: 412	Tue 11/25/08 07:31 PM Topic: A-Z Words Ending In " ING " - part 16
relishing

OfTheLake Joined Wed 10/15/08 Posts: 412	Tue 11/25/08 07:28 PM Topic: A-Z Words Ending In " ING " - part 16 Edited by OfTheLake on Tue 11/25/08 07:29 PM
(P)eeing

OfTheLake Joined Wed 10/15/08 Posts: 412	Tue 11/25/08 07:26 PM Topic: word association for advanced intermediates - part 11
pistol

OfTheLake Joined Wed 10/15/08 Posts: 412	Tue 11/25/08 01:46 PM Topic: Would you kiss the person above you?? - part 3
holly is now on the creative writing forum

OfTheLake Joined Wed 10/15/08 Posts: 412	Tue 11/25/08 01:44 PM Topic: Holly is here!
soft hands reaching across time touching down through the layers of scar tissue to the one muscle that refuses to cooperate 1onethousand2onethousand3onethousand... BREATHE! she causes that breath to hitch stall and then to race like a junker car left too long abandoned in the cold 1onethousand2onethousand3onethousand... BREATHE! DAMN YOU! sputtering, but beginning to draw air on it's own she rests she has given the engine life This wreck is being restore

OfTheLake Joined Wed 10/15/08 Posts: 412	Tue 11/25/08 01:17 PM Topic: re-name who's above you - part 2
okayoffthelakedude everydaysaHOLLYday

OfTheLake Joined Wed 10/15/08 Posts: 412	Tue 11/25/08 01:14 PM Topic: re-name who's above you - part 2
Happyholidayhappyholiday

OfTheLake Joined Wed 10/15/08 Posts: 412	Tue 11/25/08 01:09 PM Topic: re-name who's above you - part 2 Edited by OfTheLake on Tue 11/25/08 01:10 PM
msslapntickle ooops!

OfTheLake Joined Wed 10/15/08 Posts: 412	Tue 11/25/08 01:08 PM Topic: Would you kiss the person above you?? - part 3
Sure i will! If He'll tell me how I can get into the creative writing forums! I've got a topic just for me n u OH! We'll get creative!

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