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Tue 11/01/11 09:07 AM


all positive and negative critics are welcomed
Did you write this Jdie, because it's a exceptional poem.smokin



i did, my friend wrote it. he is a poet.

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Tue 11/01/11 01:58 AM

The other day, a friend of mine, who is 35, came to my parents' house and cried over a guy (age 36) who treated her like an ***! This guy has his own place, make good money, driving a Benz, travels the world, he got it made but cant treat my friend like a queen! I told her to go out with this other guy, who is 24 years old, no "big" job, no car, no own place but goes to college and make little money but treats all women with respect and class and treats them like queens. Now ladies, would you prefer a man who has everything but treats you like crap or a man who has very little but going to school and treats you very good and nice and will never, ever hit you...ever!!?? Which one will you pick and comment on it!

Thank you ladies and have a good day!!



am young i dnt mind, going out with the collage boy,,, but that F***k rich loser can go to hell!!()college will not be forevr in college.

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Tue 11/01/11 01:52 AM
all positive and negative critics are welcomed

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Mon 10/31/11 09:11 AM

thank you bigsmile

anytime

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Mon 10/31/11 09:10 AM

A very deep write, on a number of levels....smokin



skin deep

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Mon 10/31/11 07:26 AM
am glad u enjoy'd readin it

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Mon 10/31/11 05:01 AM

coffee please, with lots of lovin....I mean sugar whoa


ha!! on your way

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Mon 10/31/11 03:22 AM

drinker


What u drinking?? can i have some too??

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Mon 10/31/11 03:21 AM
i can read this poem over and over,and every time i read it,i get a new meaning,,,, i do'nt know about you?

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Mon 10/31/11 02:08 AM
We fell in love in a broken place
We turned our eyes from the blinding light
Wandered away from the path of grace
Drowning fast in the dark of night

Your gentle touch turned as cold as stone
Your selfishness; poison in my veins
My heart is broken; I'm so alone
What did I do to deserve this pain?

The weight of this curtain that’s dropped on my back
Is crushing my bones; my lungs have collapsed
It came out of nowhere, crippling my soul
The rudders have shattered; I have no control

Flashing, foreboding, The Exit reads “Entrance”
Stuck in this horror that doesn’t make sense
My wings have been clipped as I fall from the sky
A shot in the dark; I hear no reply

Our hearts have been broken, hardened, and bruised
Our minds have been poisoned; severely confused
Our bodies are tired and frail like the veil
that has wrapped our souls up in the pirate’s black sail

We had our dreams right in front of us
All lights were green on the open roads
How did this diamond turn to dust?
Sweetie please help me I still don't know

“Another chance” is far too late
To turn this ship away from it’s hate
The power’s gone out; the show can’t go on
The air is afire with affliction songs


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Mon 10/31/11 02:02 AM
shades

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Sun 10/30/11 10:26 AM

im thinking about how awesome last night was........:tongue:




what did you do?

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Sun 10/30/11 10:25 AM
winking listening to Adel,Rolling In The Deep «

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Sun 10/30/11 10:20 AM
Just wanna wish ya' all a lovely week ahead and a bless'd 1 too. i'll be right here waiting for you, to get back

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Sun 10/30/11 10:17 AM
happy
hey guys , who want some coffee? tea? or some H20??