thanks :D
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id love a translation.
it definitely has a nice meter to it. |
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rose of sharyn
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KsE have some good stuff. this is a good song. bid farewell is one of the heaviest songs out there.
sorry to hear about your friend man. keep on keepin' on. |
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wow, thanks guys and gals.
well, gals. :D |
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teddy bear. :D
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Noise
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beautiful. you've got some style. :D
keep writing, yours is some of my favorite on here. stay strong. <3 |
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:D <3
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its not like i had seen her before-
not like i had tried looking- not like i knew what to say, to do. gaze tilting upward; feeling stabs in my eyes sharp penance for crimes i tried and tried to redeem to no avail i got my wish now feeling my face kiss the concrete in a way less than subtle tasting the rust-flavored apology drip dripping from my lip prostrate the pariah of my (cardboard box) penthouse. looking up to the form draped in rain knowing if i saw too clearly, i couldnt understand her eyes on me now dont answer dont answer i dont want to know her eyes trace my wounds completely oblivious no, ignore this ignore this cant you see i dont want to know? |
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good stuff man. keep it up. :D
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good stuff man. keep it up. :D
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i know exactly how that is, spelldancer. :)
good write and welcome. |
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gay bar naps
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thanks lamom. thats sweet. :)
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gay bar naps
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haha pkd. sounds wild. maybe a bit dangerous. :x
ty ty teddybear. :D |
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haha thanks artgurl. :D
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gay bar naps
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aww ya amaze me with your style love it as always. Humm gay bars now must say they are an experience to visit totaly different atmosphere. Went with some friends many years ago hey had to see for my self and we had a blast. yeah, i go occasionally. always a great time; i have a lot of gay friends and such. thanks. :D |
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very nice. nice twist. :D
good write. keep it up. |
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i miss you
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beautiful write. i enjoyed it immensely.
sounds like your son is a lucky boy. <3 |
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gay bar naps
Edited by
Unsane
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Fri 12/14/07 10:35 AM
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a set written while out dancing at a gay bar last night. 50 cent beer is divine. DISCLAIMER: im not gay, please dont message me with such intents. :P no offense guys. :D
--- there ain't nothin' like BOOM BOOM strutter stutter- an' this ain't no free verse cause there ain't no room on this bar nap i'm not ashamed i feel more LIFE now than ever. the music is bad. but its a part of me. part of everyone here and i DONT care what it is to think. --- ain't nothin' like hand on hand swing past the sing past the blacklights burning the decency from OUR america is a place where 'understanding' can only be read in spanish. --- and yeah, i want to say that i don't know the score. but i see the look in that mans eyes and i wonder whatinthehell i'm doing loving the look of her eyes. |
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'oh' is my new addiction
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teddybear <3
happens to the best of us, rockman. :D thanks for posting. |
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very nice. hope to see more from you, and welcome.
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