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Mon 12/17/07 04:24 PM
thanks :D

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Mon 12/17/07 01:29 PM
id love a translation.

it definitely has a nice meter to it.

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Mon 12/17/07 01:27 PM
KsE have some good stuff. this is a good song. bid farewell is one of the heaviest songs out there.

sorry to hear about your friend man. keep on keepin' on.

Unsane's photo
Mon 12/17/07 01:24 PM
wow, thanks guys and gals.

well, gals. :D

Unsane's photo
Mon 12/17/07 12:54 PM
teddy bear. :D

Unsane's photo
Mon 12/17/07 10:53 AM
beautiful. you've got some style. :D

keep writing, yours is some of my favorite on here.

stay strong. <3

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Mon 12/17/07 09:43 AM
:D <3

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Sat 12/15/07 06:12 PM
its not like i had seen her before-
not like i had tried looking-
not like i knew what to say, to do.

gaze tilting upward;
feeling stabs in my eyes
sharp penance for crimes
i tried and tried to redeem

to no avail

i got my wish
now feeling my face kiss the concrete
in a way less than subtle
tasting the rust-flavored apology
drip dripping from my lip
prostrate
the pariah of my
(cardboard box)
penthouse.

looking up to the form draped in rain
knowing if i saw too clearly, i couldnt understand

her eyes on me now

dont answer
dont answer
i dont want to know

her eyes trace my wounds
completely oblivious

no, ignore this
ignore this
cant you see i dont want
to know?

Unsane's photo
Sat 12/15/07 11:11 AM
good stuff man. keep it up. :D

Unsane's photo
Sat 12/15/07 11:09 AM
good stuff man. keep it up. :D

Unsane's photo
Fri 12/14/07 09:14 PM
i know exactly how that is, spelldancer. :)

good write and welcome.

Unsane's photo
Fri 12/14/07 09:00 PM
thanks lamom. thats sweet. :)

Unsane's photo
Fri 12/14/07 03:21 PM
haha pkd. sounds wild. maybe a bit dangerous. :x

ty ty teddybear. :D

Unsane's photo
Fri 12/14/07 11:28 AM
haha thanks artgurl. :D

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Fri 12/14/07 10:58 AM

aww ya amaze me with your style love it as always.

Humm gay bars now must say they are an experience to
visit totaly different atmosphere. Went with some
friends many years ago hey had to see for my self
and we had a blast. bigsmile


yeah, i go occasionally. always a great time; i have a lot of gay friends and such.
thanks. :D

Unsane's photo
Fri 12/14/07 10:34 AM
very nice. nice twist. :D

good write. keep it up.

Unsane's photo
Fri 12/14/07 10:33 AM
beautiful write. i enjoyed it immensely.

sounds like your son is a lucky boy.

<3

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Fri 12/14/07 10:05 AM
Edited by Unsane on Fri 12/14/07 10:35 AM
a set written while out dancing at a gay bar last night. 50 cent beer is divine. DISCLAIMER: im not gay, please dont message me with such intents. :P no offense guys. :D
---
there ain't nothin' like
BOOM BOOM
strutter stutter- an'

this ain't no free verse cause
there
ain't no room on this bar nap

i'm not ashamed
i feel more
LIFE
now than ever.

the music is bad.
but its a part of
me.

part of everyone here and i
DONT
care what it
is
to
think.

---

ain't nothin' like
hand on hand
swing past the
sing past the
blacklights burning
the decency from

OUR america

is a place where
'understanding'
can only be
read in spanish.

---

and yeah,
i want to say that
i don't know
the score.

but i see the look in that mans eyes
and i wonder whatinthehell
i'm doing

loving the look of her eyes.

Unsane's photo
Wed 12/12/07 05:51 PM
teddybear <3

happens to the best of us, rockman. :D thanks for posting.

Unsane's photo
Wed 12/12/07 05:02 PM
very nice. hope to see more from you, and welcome.