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Sat 12/01/07 07:03 PM
"and as we wind on down the road"

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Sat 12/01/07 07:00 PM
I mean, who do you sound like?

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Sat 12/01/07 06:56 PM
The harp? hehe. Maybe on the sad songs man! Dmx, you sing? Like what bands or singers?

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Sat 12/01/07 06:37 PM
That had a nice warm feeling to it. I liked it, good job.

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Sat 12/01/07 06:30 PM
Same here, wolfeyes. The problem is: I can't sing. That didn't stop Dylan though, hehe.

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Sat 12/01/07 06:29 PM
hehe. I had to do that. I have more than 100 songs in my vault and they are dying to come out! This song was dedicated to my friend who does not care about my well being. November 7, 2006: I almost fainted at the gym I go to and I told the gym to call my friend downstairs to get my stuff out of my locker and THE JERK NEVER CAME!

Thick In The Brain (Not Quite Sane) Written: 11/08/06

What the hell were you
Thinking that night
Didn't you figure out
Something aint right
I said I'd be back
And never came to
Don't you think something was up
When I never returned to you

CHORUS:
Don't you look
Don't you see
All the chaos
Surrounding me
Or are you thick
Thick in the brain
Not knowing
Something is not quite sane

They called you
You never went
To the place
What they thought they meant?!
I don't know
You don't care
You don't know
That I'm not there

CHORUS

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Sat 12/01/07 06:07 PM
This was probably my favorite one. It is just so cool. Thanks txs. The songs I write now are spur of the moment, very little thought. This was a thought song.

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Sat 12/01/07 06:05 PM
Covington: mine is more like 50 times. High school was the worst, but high school girls were more for popularity. This day in age people are a little more willing to chance but still lean to the looks.

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Sat 12/01/07 05:53 PM
Darn, I must have thrown out that Christmas song I wrote! It was so true! Why did I throw it out? Oh well. I will try to keep the faith, txs.

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Sat 12/01/07 05:44 PM
No problem. Completely normal to hurt after something like that.

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Sat 12/01/07 05:42 PM
Thanks. I don't know why people do these things. Looks aren't all that matter!

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Sat 12/01/07 05:32 PM
My observation on this is that the guy is either a womanizer or just some scumbag who doesn't care about the feelings of others. I have dealt with people like this before. I knew this girl once that dated this real jerk who cheated on her constantly (I heard from a variety of sources) and I flat out told her that too. The bf almost beat me up because she told HIM! I have no idea if she figured him out; for her own sake I hope she did.

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Sat 12/01/07 05:28 PM
I have noticed in my experiences as a single person, looks outweigh the person so I wrote this little song/poem, I dunno what it is to be honest, hehe.

Think Before You Judge (12/01/07)

Hey there girl
What is up with you
You want to go for a drink somewhere?
You say yeah right
You are not my type
And you laugh at my despair
Think before you judge
You may end up paying in the end
Think before you judge
Looks aren't all that matter my friend
Some girls look
Some girls laugh
Some girls point
And only see one half
Before you say "no way"
Before you burn me out
Look beyond one dimension
And then see what I am all about

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Sat 12/01/07 05:19 PM
Oh, well, GOOD!

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Sat 12/01/07 05:16 PM
You kicked them to the road, good for you. It's people like that who really tick me off. People sometimes are stupid.

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Sat 12/01/07 05:08 PM
Powerful, full of energy and life, and a wake up call. Nobody needs to be treated like that. You will find someone who is not a "jerk" (this is based on a real person right?). I like it. Five stars! Good work!

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Sat 12/01/07 05:04 PM
You know, some of the best poems are the SICKEST, hehe. That was excellent. I think it made everybody horny, hehe. Sorry, it's THE POEM!

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Sat 12/01/07 04:59 PM
I have too many damn songs, hehe. I should just keep on posting them to see what people say. You are right. I should try to enjoy the holidays but I am single and I don't have much money. I do have health and a job so I guess that is a start! I actually wrote a song about the true meaning of Christmas. I should find it and post it. It's more of a commercial bashing.

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Sat 12/01/07 04:54 PM
This is one of my favorites. It is simple yet somewhat complex. The song kind of repeats itself a little. This was written back January 13, 2002.

Can You See The World Out There

Can you feel the earth move
Under your feet every day?
Can you see the ground moving around?
Can you feel the hate and sorrow
Others are feeling every day?
Can you feel everybody's emotions today?

CHORUS:
Can you see the world out there?
With the clouds and the sky way up here
Can you see the clouds and the sky way up there?

Can you tell when something's wrong
In the world without it happening?
Can you predict the future with your mind?
Can you show the meaning of life is
Through your truthful eyes?
Can you explain the unexplained for all who are here?

CHORUS

Side note: Not every song has to have a rhyme in it. I look at this song and see a complex message. It can mean whatever you want it to mean. That may have been my intention, hehe. BE KIND!

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Sat 12/01/07 04:43 PM
Been there, done that. Most of the songs I have written are about love.