Ace's delight

I lay there behind her touching her skin
and from her movements she wanted it in
she loved to feel me and my soft gentle touch
and feeling my throbbing that she wanted so much
i moved my hand down just as slow as i could go
and as it moved it down her back began to bow
her shoulders pushed hard against my chest
my hand slowly lifting and caressing her breast
her nipples became hard and her skin became hot
and then she let out a sigh as i touched the right spot
slowly sliding my fingers in where it was so wet
she asked for my c o ck but i told her not yet
i kissed my way down her back and in between her legs
as i licked her clit softly she began to quietly beg
her temperature rose and her legs squeezed my head
her arms out stretched to the sides of my bed
she rolled to her back and pulled my head to her breast
i was hot and ready and i wanted to give her my best
i slid it inside and she softly called out my name
i could hear in her voice just a touch of sweet pain
the hours became minutes as we moved in perfect time
she said she was ready but wanted to feel mine
so with a hard and deep thrust i gave her all i had
she screamed out in pleasure she wanted it bad
i felt her nails dig and her legs squeezed me tight
then she let out on last scream of pure erotic delight
she pulled my head down and gave me a soft kiss
then we lay there together holding each other in bliss
by james "ace" covington

was this poem just a little too much

I've seen others of the same style here, so no I wouldn't say too much. Some times it can come across hotter if an allusion is made rather that a flat out statement. Not sure if that's what you're asking, but there ya have one opinion only.

ty and thats whats i was hopin for was some opinions i like feedback and it helps with my writing when i get it. ty very much and i will try to do that on my next poem

That was Hot and ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh it is mighty warm in here right now shshshshs.

Damn Covington what ya trying to do to all us poor ones that are without


Actually great write.

well thank you sweet heart and i am sorry about the poor ones that are without im doing my best to fix that problem in the world but i am only one man i can only handle so much

Ohhhhhhhh funny but good one shshshsh okay all I want for x-mas is see one goood man that can ROCK MY WORLD and true at heart hummmmmmm think Santa will make me happy this year hehehehhe hey it is worth the try lol

The snow is gonna melt over here...

wow, it suddenly got so hot in here....

well i do have a santa suit i'll see what i can work out for you i like playin santa clause cause i always have a big sack full to give out to all the bad girls

Shssssssssssssh now I want one that stays afterwards now not just for Christmas got to make myself clear in that area kinda left myself open there heheheh boy that sounded real good

i know tx but i couldnt pass it up and i know a sweet heart like you will find what you are searching for very soon.

Ohhhhhhhhh I hear ya and a sweet thought too hehehhe humm ya have some insights I dont shshsh think I have scared them all away lol

i really doubt that and as i have found the one that wants you the most is the one you least expect

You know, some of the best poems are the SICKEST, hehe. That was excellent. I think it made everybody horny, hehe. Sorry, it's THE POEM!

Shsssssssssssss I quit expecting anything long time ago ohhhh okay I'm way over due humm better ask Santa for that oversized backhoe so I can start moving those big boulders he is hiding under hehehehehhe

Sickest poems shshssh nothing about Making Love in my book is sick that is a dream come true

opps had to correct that shshshsh got sex on the brain now thanks covington

ty i appreciate the compliment and tx they arent hiding under rocks they are there just havent bumped into him yet

Welllllllllllllllll Damnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn yes it is hot in here,,,,, Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm i Like

Humm ohhhhhh now I have to play bumper body's hummmm now that might be fun


Hummmm see told ya it was hot in here hell this thread has had me going alll day see some sweet dreams coming my way soon hehehe

wow ladies ty for all the hot compliments now just to fuel the fires imagine us doing something that would inspire me to write another poem sorry anyways ty for the compliments