i actually just started using that for the first time myself. kind of fun. i like it a lot

take comfort in knowing
that you were once with me
even though it was just a dream
and never close to reality
maybe thats why it seemed
so close to perfect to me

please turn on the lights
so i can wake from this sleep
i dont wanna see
this perfect girl thats haunting my dreams
and i know that she isn't real
but i can feel her hand over mine
she tells me just go back to sleep

so turn your head
and look me in the eye
is what you're doing honesty?
i wonder sometimes
if you fall asleep just to see me
or am i just your late night run in

and let me say my peace
this time is forever
im paying a visit to you
and when i leave is never
so excuse me while i rest my head

please turn on the lights
so i can wake from this sleep
i dont wanna see
this perfect girl thats haunting my dreams
and i know that she isn't real
but i can feel her hand over mine
she tells me just go back to sleep

hey man, been playin fable 3 since it's release and loved every second of it. by far the best fable game. butttttt you cant hardly beat call of duty games. especially this one. with the new wager system.

i just usually feel proud enough that someone has paid enough attention to something i created to decide to label it. it's nice that someone spent that sort of time on my own art. labels mean nothing to me. i dont care what ne one really thinks. i know what it is and what it's about. i appreciate the consideration of someone to really look that close

lol i'm the exact same thing... mixed media abstract expressionism.

i think a lot of you may be right about me not being willing to put in the time ne more. truth is i was engaged once and before that i was with a girl for 4 years. there's probably a level of frusteration there. but i am attracted based on looks to ne one who thought i wasn't, it's just not my only stipulation ne more.

lol yeah, i dont have a ton of control over what comes out as far as the actual music is concerned. and i definatly play me some rockband too!

i agree it's chorus heavy. but i write my music way before i write my lyrics and thats just how it came out. theres a pause before the last chorus. and it slows down. and yeah it's definatly acoustic. i love acoustic music but i have more fun playing punk and metal. but unfortunately u cant do that by urself

oh no doubt... i just wanted to post it on here to see what ne body thought of the lyrics

hey everyone, i'm not trying to rant... i'm just confused i guess. ive spent my life not trying to pick up the prettiest girl i see, but instead the one who seems to be the most interesting and has the most depth. but after months they all seem to be the same. haha i know it's impossible but can someone explain to me how to find or recognize the real girls. like the ones who are nice, who have some depth, who are loyal and caring. i just dont understand i guess.

hey sorry i know i posted one yesterday but ive got a bazillion. most of these writings are songs ive written. critique away.

i took
the night alone
to reflect on the thoughts
of where i used to be
when my life
didn't stare back at me
like a stranger
that i have never seen
with the judgement
of what ive become

someone take this memory
someone please
i cant sleep
through the thought
of what i was meant to be
and where i am now
is there a difference
between these lives?

the night is young
but it feels like ive been awake forever
this place drags on
and pulls me in
to forget what dreams i have
long since forgotten
ive become a sea of complacency
since these dreams
have left me

someone take this memory
someone please
i cant sleep
through the thought
of what i was meant to be
and where i am now
is there a difference
between these lives?

so this reflection
made me see
exactly where i need to be
and i'm not afraid
of the uncertainty
of where this could take me
so i'll become everything i wanted
to ever be


someone take this memory
someone please
i cant sleep
through the thought
of what i was meant to be
and where i am now
is there a difference
between these lives?

in no way am i meaning to demean women in any way, but i personally would prefer to do the proposing myself. is that not half the experience? deciding how to do it, picking the ring, getting down on one knee? and on the opposite side, is that not half the surprise for women? not knowing exactly when/how it's going to happen?

i think what makes your proposal out of the norm is that you are taking the traditional sense of the proposal completely out of it. you are taking all the expectation out. in no way am i saying that this is a bad thing, but i dont think that it would be the way i personally would want to approach the situation

haha ne time!

thank you very much actually. i asked for the critique, i appreciate someone actually doing that. sometimes i have trouble with the grammer portion.
lol and p.s. in your third line it should be "where" not "were"
hahaha just kiddin with ya

haha thas my fav kind of stuff... where u really have to look to understand the idea

lol theyre meant to be that way
i dont use definition on purpose
i dont want anyone to truly understand the picture
it's expressionist art

well...
what a coincidence!
i'm ready to be out of school and start
i'm sure he's prolly better than i am!

i love writing about the walls. most curious part of this world. and thanks for the welcome, makes me feel like i'm part of a group

i paint
i sketch
i do tat art
mostly paint tho. there r a few on my profile

lol thats good enough...