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Tue 10/26/10 04:17 PM
It was accidentally erased.

My techniques of persuasion weakened by complete honesty, petrified of touching the wrong keyboard combination, all I want to know is if anybody wants to have a meetup in November.

October occupies a lot of time for those of us with kids and those of us without.

November supplies an opportunity to have the first actual "get-together" in a year or more.

Let's make some plans if anybody is interested.

The bar setting worked. I have suggestions if anybody is interested in a different locale.

It would be fun and let's just do it before we get so damned boring god kills us out of pity.

Sincerely me. Responses, negative or positive for the meetup idea, are entirely welcome.

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Tue 10/26/10 04:08 PM
impulsive.

to add a second (and third) -

unnaturally clingy.

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Tue 10/26/10 04:06 PM
without judgment on you as a whole - you will be mostly disappointed.

there are very few people in your area.

those that are that would fit your standards are proactively living,

doing all sorts of things you want to be introduced to

and wish you cared about

but don't.

either way, the ratings confuse me. that's my judgment. within the brilliance of a generation full of a access we covet information at a personal level and dismiss angrily those that challenge our quest.

so... sunrises or sunsets?

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Tue 10/26/10 04:01 PM
i'm expected to be "The Joker" from Batman (italics unnecessary) for Halloween. i've got the mania down but i don't know if i can get a great purple suit.

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Tue 10/26/10 04:00 PM
reminds me of that guy from mario brothers who threw porcupines out of a cloud.

just saying.

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Tue 10/26/10 03:58 PM

You can't create a blank post.

But you can post a blank stare.


your cleverness impresses me but fails to answer questions i haven't asked.

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Tue 10/26/10 03:57 PM
life's a terrible scam.

whose work should i rip to shreds, folks?

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Tue 10/26/10 03:56 PM

I'm truly impossible if I actually edit my work.


that sentence deserves its own poem.

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Tue 10/26/10 03:49 PM
you cannot create a blank post.

by doing what is natural people decide to be predictable, natural. maybe peace isn't found through comfort or sorrow, but exploration.

maybe i'm full of asterisks.

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Tue 10/26/10 03:45 PM
prove it.

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Tue 10/26/10 03:44 PM


that has not already been expressed better by someone else, who is quotable.


"I hate to advocate drugs, alcohol, violence, or insanity to anyone, but they've always worked for me."

-Hunter S. Thompson.

Therefore, you are correct in your assessment.


One of my favorite quotes.

i think this generation has ten more years to go before we find our voice, and by then it will be lost as hunter's was until his public over-examination.

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Tue 10/26/10 03:41 PM
i'll always read and won't always enjoy. thus is the plight of the writer. does the rhyme scheme work or does it work for you?

your words are powerful enough to flow without limitation, but varied enough that impressed styles might help.

they did for me.

cheers, and i look forward to your future writing.

if i sound like a pretentious dick it's not because of what i've written - it's just because i am and i enjoy what you have to show.

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Tue 10/26/10 03:35 PM
woah. thanks for the feedback.

it's difficult to express sincerity in words.

special thanks to kc and fear who picked me apart.

that's all i need.

wonderful of ocean and, as always, bastet, for visiting my words. much appreciated.

*emoticon*

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Tue 10/26/10 01:11 PM
oh, have some fun. don't be so cynical to possibility.

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Tue 10/26/10 12:56 PM
what i like is the imagery. i think that your intelligence suffers from the definition of your writing. explore different forms.

still - i enjoyed this.

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Tue 10/26/10 12:54 PM
good call.

you should read my asterisky free-verse poetry and comment.

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Tue 10/26/10 12:52 PM
i don't enjoy coffee and i've had a long day.

how are you, genuinely?

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Tue 10/26/10 12:50 PM
as i sit
sipping my V8 and vodka
i realize such epiphanous examples
of life
i cease to be amazed

heartburn is the daily concern
my ex-girlfriend's work got published
and i don't like it
my

heartburn

is a product
of my actions
just like

heartbreak

See...?

nobody wants poetry.
i've found
that i have lost
so much in verses
as in vengeance.

questions are worthless
unless you have, at least,
a ******** answer to provide.

this is hypocritical in nature,
but nature never moves fast enough for me.

there's a thin line between
brilliant
writer
and
dislocated
ink salesman.

i wear a better tie, and try to pretend
that qualifies me for the second.

also, i'm in love with a girl dying of a terminal illness.

are my words more or less sincere or more or less accurate because of that?

open question.

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Tue 10/26/10 12:43 PM
i'm unintentionally argumentative.

also - certain phrases make me feel alive, such as the above.

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Tue 10/26/10 12:42 PM

where did he go?


an interminable vacation.