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My techniques of persuasion weakened by complete honesty, petrified of touching the wrong keyboard combination, all I want to know is if anybody wants to have a meetup in November. October occupies a lot of time for those of us with kids and those of us without. November supplies an opportunity to have the first actual "get-together" in a year or more. Let's make some plans if anybody is interested. The bar setting worked. I have suggestions if anybody is interested in a different locale. It would be fun and let's just do it before we get so damned boring god kills us out of pity. Sincerely me. Responses, negative or positive for the meetup idea, are entirely welcome. |
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impulsive.
to add a second (and third) - unnaturally clingy. |
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Under 30 Crowd
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without judgment on you as a whole - you will be mostly disappointed.
there are very few people in your area. those that are that would fit your standards are proactively living, doing all sorts of things you want to be introduced to and wish you cared about but don't. either way, the ratings confuse me. that's my judgment. within the brilliance of a generation full of a access we covet information at a personal level and dismiss angrily those that challenge our quest. so... sunrises or sunsets? |
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i'm expected to be "The Joker" from Batman (italics unnecessary) for Halloween. i've got the mania down but i don't know if i can get a great purple suit.
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hey.
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reminds me of that guy from mario brothers who threw porcupines out of a cloud.
just saying. |
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You can't create a blank post. But you can post a blank stare. your cleverness impresses me but fails to answer questions i haven't asked. |
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life's a terrible scam.
whose work should i rip to shreds, folks? |
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Crooked Halo
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I'm truly impossible if I actually edit my work. that sentence deserves its own poem. |
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you cannot create a blank post.
by doing what is natural people decide to be predictable, natural. maybe peace isn't found through comfort or sorrow, but exploration. maybe i'm full of asterisks. |
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prove it.
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that has not already been expressed better by someone else, who is quotable. "I hate to advocate drugs, alcohol, violence, or insanity to anyone, but they've always worked for me." -Hunter S. Thompson. Therefore, you are correct in your assessment. One of my favorite quotes. i think this generation has ten more years to go before we find our voice, and by then it will be lost as hunter's was until his public over-examination. |
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Crooked Halo
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i'll always read and won't always enjoy. thus is the plight of the writer. does the rhyme scheme work or does it work for you?
your words are powerful enough to flow without limitation, but varied enough that impressed styles might help. they did for me. cheers, and i look forward to your future writing. if i sound like a pretentious dick it's not because of what i've written - it's just because i am and i enjoy what you have to show. |
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Pirate Docking
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woah. thanks for the feedback.
it's difficult to express sincerity in words. special thanks to kc and fear who picked me apart. that's all i need. wonderful of ocean and, as always, bastet, for visiting my words. much appreciated. *emoticon* |
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oh, have some fun. don't be so cynical to possibility.
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Crooked Halo
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what i like is the imagery. i think that your intelligence suffers from the definition of your writing. explore different forms.
still - i enjoyed this. |
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good call.
you should read my asterisky free-verse poetry and comment. |
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what's your appeal?
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i don't enjoy coffee and i've had a long day.
how are you, genuinely? |
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Pirate Docking
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as i sit
sipping my V8 and vodka i realize such epiphanous examples of life i cease to be amazed heartburn is the daily concern my ex-girlfriend's work got published and i don't like it my heartburn is a product of my actions just like heartbreak See...? nobody wants poetry. i've found that i have lost so much in verses as in vengeance. questions are worthless unless you have, at least, a ******** answer to provide. this is hypocritical in nature, but nature never moves fast enough for me. there's a thin line between brilliant writer and dislocated ink salesman. i wear a better tie, and try to pretend that qualifies me for the second. also, i'm in love with a girl dying of a terminal illness. are my words more or less sincere or more or less accurate because of that? open question. |
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i'm unintentionally argumentative.
also - certain phrases make me feel alive, such as the above. |
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where did he go? an interminable vacation. |
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